Hi - I like all of your designs! In general, I'd like to emphasize on KIteBar and make the "the" smaller and unobtrusive. Also, I'm not so sure about the steam on the coffee cup, creates sense of cold weather/warm drink, and it's exactly the opposite there. #23 - I like the orange sand bar and the simplicity of it. Maybe too simple? Can you try adding one more color, add a coffee bean maybe as the dot of the "i", and maybe make the palm tree look a bit more like a palm tree, maybe by just adding one more leaf or make the trunk look like a tree trunk. #19 - not sure what the third icon is.. looks like a space ship to me :). also, see the general comments above. #21 - great idea! See general comments above. Maybe replace the coffee cup with a coffee bean? Also, I'd rather not have the word "bar" stand out, right now it looks more like a description and it should be like a part of the name. Maybe put theKiteBar on top and Est. 2014 on bottom? or some other configuration? Thanks!
Also, #21 is lacking the sense of movement, not sure how that can be incorporated into this design though, seems too bar-y. #19 - add the palm tree, but make it look a bit more like palm tree.
Thank you so much for the great feedback. And glad you like my concept :)
I will revise and perfect all, turn the icons more real. And will work based on all the other suggestions you have made in your comments above.
Also will submit other layouts dispositions as you request.
I´m at work. Here is morning. At the end of the afternoon i will start working on revisions and will try to submit asap for your consideration. Thanks.
Thanks!! One more note - on #21,the text reads clear, but the info inside is too detailed to see from afar, and too busy. Like the concept, but would need to be a single large logo here, not multiple small ones.
#22, replace "San Francisco Bay Area" with "Pittsburg, California" or "Pittsburg, CA" and see how it looks, maybe try a different font. I like that one but I'm not sure it goes well with the font of the KiteBar.
Wow, that's a lot of designs! Not sure where to start.. The turquoise looks too green to me, can you make it a little more blue/teal? #60, #61, #71, #72, , #76 - too busy #77 - like it, looks like a logo for a brewery but it will make a nice sticker or coaster. Not so great for web or t-shirts. #57 - I like it because it looks simple right next to the rest. Can you tilt the kite to the right? Something doesn't look right the way it is, the lines are pointing in one direction and the kite is looking down.
Hi Joao - thank you for the (so many) revisions! I think #101 and 104 are closest to what we're looking for. I also like #77 because it's different and it will look good as a sign on the front door. #101 - I like the colors. Can you reverse them (make the orange blue, and the blue-orange) to see how it looks? Also, can you show how it looks in black and white and in gray scale? #104 - can you make it the same colors as #101? Could you also try to make the palm tree less detailed? For example, remove the little pointy edges of the leafs, and maybe make it a bit smaller. For both #101 and #104, make the strings of the kite thinner. Also, I think the shape of the kite is too round. It does fit the shape and curves of the letters and the sand but it looks too much like a balloon. Try to cut the lower (right) tip a bit to line up with the end of the string. Thank you!
Revisions 1st based on #101 #108 - kite modiffied #109 - little effect beign the letters #110 - orange sand bar #111, #112 - inverted colours #113 | #114 | #115 | #116 - grayscale #117 | #118 - black (white) #119 | #120 - coloured backgrounds #121 | #122 - One colour logo
2nd based on #77 #123 | #124 | #125 | #126 | #127 #128 | #129 | #130 | #131
3rd based on #104 - Palm tree revised. And different kite on all. Can you please choose the one you like? So i can do to the one you will choose the same versions black and white, grayscalle i´ve done to the others. #132 | #133 | #134 | #135 | #136
Here is 21 pm. I will be awake until 1 am more or less ready to work on revisions if needed.
Tomorrow by 6 am i will be on a mini vacations with my girl. And i will be back on 27 April by night. Hope it´s no problem. If you still interested on my logo by them. We will have more time on Judging phase to do more revisions if needed. I just wanted to let you know of this. I´m going camping with her, maybe i will have access to wireless there, but I'm not sure.
I like the kite on #132. Can you make the orange a little more intense, like in between the orange in #132 and #104 but closer to #104? Also, turns out nobody recognizes the coffee bean as a coffee bean... can you change it to an orange dot?