still keep coming back to this one. I really like it- it just feels like it's missing something. Can you add some kind of details to it to kick it up a notch?
Can you do another option like this one, but take the "T" out of the monogram? Also maybe another option where the lines above and below the text "The Heirloom Vault" look like they are made from bamboo?
Really like this one! One thing I am noticing though, is that the way that the H and V intersect makes it look like 2 small "H"s on either side of the "T" if that makes sense.
I like that I could separate the graphic from the text and use the graphic as my "branding"...so that essentially if people saw the jar with the monogram they would associate it with my company. It is still feeling a bit 2-dimensional to me. Maybe add some "texture" or extra outlines of some kind to the monogram letters or the jar itself?
Really like the font and structure of the wording. At first glance, the hands holding the jar look like antlers to me, though. Am not in love with the graphic but really like the text part
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Update proposal using boxwood topiaries #103 #104 #105 and #106, let me know your thoughts.
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Update proposal bamboo line in green color
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I try to make more prominent for the bamboo line #71
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #66 #67 #68 #69 and #70
- take out T
- make more detail
- replace line with bamboo shape
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Thanks for feedback, update proposals #46 and #47, let me know your thoughts.
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal with focus on THV initial #23 #24 #25 #26 and #27, let me know your thoughts.
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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