The Guest House on ParkLogo Design Contest

my approach is towards classical & elegant but not too English. any feedback appreciated.

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a more contemporary approach

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#15 - I like the elegant look, and the lines, however the colors don't seem to work. And it's lacking a contemporary feel. The biggest issue is that this will be placed on a website and on stationary and cards, etc. and the color background would require that color be used througout. Looking for a white background to be used. Thanks.

#28 and #29 - Need white background. And in that one, I like the connecting of the letters, but they are a bit too connected - kinda blends too much and is a little challenging to decipher. I do indeed like the lower case "the" and the smaller font "on". Could the words "guest house" be stacked, with the "on" the same, but have the word Park in a larger cursive style? having this incorporated into one of the other logos presented might be nice as I do like that approach.

Hi,
Thank you very much for your feedback!
I'll work on the entries ^_^

revised entries for your consideration :)

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#43 and 44 - No. Though I do love the ----------- on both sides of "the". That's cool looking.

#45 - I like. With the exception of the size. "park" should be smaller, or closer to the same size as the "guest house", and the design at the bottom i don't think should be any wider than the text. Seems a bit too much, and would like to see less "elegant" and more "contemporary". Lastly, I do want color(s) in the logo.
I like where this is evolving.

Thanks for the feedback!

I'm trying one of the entries in a different font type. I changed the look of the word 'park' to more a 'current' elegant style. Please let me know if you preferred the previous one.
I also integrated the lines in the new entries.
Again, I appreciate your feedback ^_^

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#48 - Getting very close. I love this new design. Very simple, yet elegant. Now, can we get some color in there somewhere? Not sure where, but perhaps some green? And I really do like some of the signets that have been created. The addition of something like that into what is there would be ideal. Thoughts? Your feedback is also appreciated.

In this entry, I've included a signet which comprises of lowercase 'h','p' and capital 'G'. This might look a little abstract but it shows more identity. Perhaps it can used on napkins or cups etc. ^_^

The colors I used are based on fresh & sophisticated, revolving minty green combination.

I'll be submitting a few more variations base on this concept. Please tell me what you think~

Have a nice day!

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a new signet and color combination for your consideration ;)

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another signet for your consideration~

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#89 - Not a fan of the color choices in this. But I dig the signet a bit.

some new color schemes and layouts

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#122 - I like the font and text alot. The word Park is in the format I prefer. I'm just not thrilled with the signet. It doesn't pop out at me.

#122 - don't lose the line that rests above Guest House and surronds "the" - it's awesome.

a few signet selections and a different font layout

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