#16 - A friend of mine really liked your entry. I wasn't necessarily sold on it right away to be honest. But I also couldn't put my finger on it. First, the blue background won't work. I need it to be white. It would need to be more crisp for me to appreciate. It seems to be a little too "artsy". I'm probably just not a fan of the font perhaps. The curly lines on the bottom are not contemporary in my perspective. Though I do like the free form line above. The comments were positive from others, but the concensus was that it was too feminine.