The Guest House on ParkLogo Design Contest

Hey here my first entries. Any feedback very appreciated!
Cheers,
David

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#25 and #26 - Very nice. Elegant. As you can see from my other comments, I'm not tied to the original colors I referenced but I appreciate you adhering to them initially. I like the strategic use of lower case lettering. But I don't get a contemporary feel from it, and I feel as though it's somewhat plain. Kinda like it could be used by any other guest house out there. It's very "hotelish".... Thanks.

Thanks for the feedback. Here some revisions and new ideas!
The signet is a combination of the letters g, o and p.
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David - I like the latest in the grey and light green. Classy, but hip. Elegant, but fun. Could you perhaps try with the word "house" separate since that is how the title actually is of the business. And of course capitalizing the first letter... "House"? Perhaps have it slightly beneath the word Guest, and indented? I don't know. I like it but I need to have it separated.

I love the "the" and "on park" styles and placement.

As for the signet... I dig it. But I wasn't getting the letter 'o' until you pointed it out. I was getting a mirrored image of "h". I like the slanted version better but agree with your decision to have it vertical when using the cursive font. Maybe try the signet slanted in other locations? Slightly larger? Above or below? I have no idea. You are the master! But I like where you are going with this.

--Dave.

I'm really hoping to see a revised version as requested in my last comment. Please. It's the only reason I don't have u ranked first!

Yeah, sorry about that! I got a pile of stuff to do at work! Here are the first revisions, though I'll be working on some more the next days.
Oh and thanks for the great feedback!
Cheers

Another idea. Made the logo look like an old us-streetsign.

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#62. David - Everyone seems to like this a great deal. As do I, but I feel that the script is just a bit too fancy.

Thanks, here the revisions with a less fancy font!

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#102 - Could I see what it would look like with the words "guest house" as all caps (GUEST HOUSE) as well as traditional capitalizaion (Guest House).

Thanks,

There you go! Some font variations.

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#127 Could I see this with the words "guest house" in small caps (not lowercase nor uppercase, but small cap style). Thanks

Hey, here some more revisions!

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2 more ideas

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#193 - I love your latest logo design. I believe that you can make changes during judging mode. If so, I would like to see the font that might be similar to the entry that I have ranked as second. Using small caps and that font for the words "guest" and 'house". I dig the new signet, and I like the font for the word "park".

#193 - I would also like to see this in a less "crunched" format. perhaps stretch the signet and more spaces in the text. the logo itself seems small and crunched up.

with these changes and the ones expressed earlier, i'm ready to move forward!

thanks a lot!

Thanks again fpr the feedback! Here the revisions

(This comment references Entry #195)

i like the flipping of the colors to have gray at bottom. i just wish the "h" and "g' could be more easily and noticeably separated as they were when you first created the signet without the box. that seems to get lost when we include the box.

Hey, I tried my best, but it's not that easy to achieve that look with the signet in a box. Here the revisions

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206. I didn't like the line. Would it be possible to make the box bigger so that the stem of the "h" is longer?

There you go!

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