Hi, #12 navy border change live music to fuel dock more defined, vivid (less washed out) gar (see original photo that i provided in our profile). use the graduated blue on the word "the" to match "gnarly gar" blue. I like the direction the gar is facing in this one. i like the font and overall design. "lake travis, texas floating....." in black to match black dots that will be on gar's tail. thanks again for your entry! anna
#16 drop "the" to #18's "the" position then make fish larger and more defined/vivid as photo submitted (looks dull and the longnose gar is not grayish). please change "live music" to "fuel dock" change gray text to black thanks, anna
#27 Navy border "floating restaurant..." darker Can you have the fish taken off the top and put behind the text as if he's jumping out of the water behind the words with the angle putting his nose in the 1 or 2 o'clock position? would like to see this with and without the border. thanks! anna