Can you add a white or silver outline to the outside of the badge - the logo needs to work on the dark blue of the home jersey as well as the white of the away jersey.
Can you add some 'hockey tape effect' to the hockey sticks - they look a little like golf clubs at the moment.
I like #7 as a secondary image. Can you turn the hockey sticks up the other way? - it might make a nice shoulder patch to contrast the main logo on the chest / front.
Perhaps also reverse the colour format - so dark blue inside the shield, light blue outside?
#26 - can we add a big more shading to the image? the grey shading in #23 gives the Rat good shape.
And can you try something with the mouth? perhaps a tooth poking through? Eyes are good, nose is good, whiskers are good - I think it just needs something different around the mouth...
Hello again Mr. Stan, Thank you, glad you like them:), no worry about 25, i just try for another option. i will prepare for another changes and update by tonight jakarta time
#47 - it's a very minor point, but we haven't got it quite right yet for the puck 100%.
Can you make it more 3-D - I suggest add some grey highlights to the surface of the puck or a highlight to the leading edge of the puck.
Maybe even give the puck motion and bring it bursting out of the shield?
It may be too subtle for the embroidered image (I'll make it simpler if that's the case), but as I'm also using this artwork for a web page - this little big of detail might be very nice.
Perhaps surf the web with the keyword puck and have a look at some ideas.
#22 - can you then add this updated puck artwork to this design please.
I will keep trying for the puck, about using on shirt and on website: how if there will be 2 versions of the logo, one with limited colors and less detail for the shirt and the other one with gradient effect and hi details..might be a bit different between them but it will be just the finishing effect.
Mr.Stan, It's very busy day to me out there, and it's 3 am now here in Jakarta, i need some rest and will be back to you with the 2nd version options by this day.:) is that ok?
I think I like #48 better at this point - the balance of white and blue look sharper than the grey.
If you added more colors to #52 to make the image look bettered and with more impact (so we would use this version of the logo on the web page) - what would you suggest? Be creative.
I wanted to thank you once again for your hard work - I appreciate your level of responsiviness in making alterations and following my suggestions.
Pleasure to have had you working on our logo.
I'm sorry to say that we can only pick one - and we went with the other designer mainly because the rat-man image got better feedback from our players.
But it was this close...!
Thanks again - and good luck with your other competitions.
Keep an eye out for my contests - I have another running currently which is a bit simpler in concept than this sports logo. Would like to see your ideas on that one.