Hi. Thank you for your drawings. We like them a lot! Here are some of our suggestions: - replace the umbrella with an ice cream cone - remove the green hat and add ear muffs - make both signs the same color; try all green or all orange - change the color of "the" and "pointe" to a lighter color - remove the "lamp" circle on the top of the pole (we don't want it to look like a street lamp). Make it smaller to make it look like a pole top
For your information, the background for this logo is going to be yellow. This might be helpful for you to see what to envision.
We love your new design! In entry #21, please give us different color options for the pole and the signs. (we don't want it to look like Christmas with the red, white, and green combinations) Everything else is perfect! :) Thank you.
Hi. Can you please make some additional changes to entry #24? We would like you to remove the penguin's shoes so that we can see his yellow feet. Also, can you try a different design for the penguin's face? We were thinking of something a little different. Maybe bigger eyes, a more pronounced beak.
Hakadu, Thank you for the designs. Can you please continue working on different faces for the penguin? Please give us several options. Everything else looks great! Thanks.
Here's some more guidance for entry #42, which is our favorite, so far. Your penguin looks scared, instead of smiling & having fun. Thanks. We look forward to seeing your new designs. By the way, we'll be out of the house for the next 4 hours, so there's no rush.
Hakadu, Entry #66 is the closest penguin face to what we like. However, he still looks a little scared. Please change it so that he can look happy :) Keep working on the penguin face... that is the only thing that we do not love about your design. You are very close :) Thank you!!
#71 -I've uploaded a new face for the penguin and I've also uploaded it separated from the rest of the logo so it can be seen bigger #72. Let me know if it's closer to the target or else we'll just have to get back to the drawing board :)
We're getting closer! #80 is the closest to what we want, so that's the best starting place for the following changes. 1. Please make the black part of the eyes bigger 2. Have the penguin looking straight ahead (at the people viewing the logo) instead of to the side. 3. We like the open beak and the rosey cheeks! 4. Try making the beak straight and more triangular, rather than curved. 5. Have the penguin stand instead of pulling/falling back. We like the ice cream cone as is. Thanks!
One more thing. Originally, you showed the band across the top of the head on the ear muffs, but now that's gone. Please put it back because that connects the ears and makes it look like ear muffs. Right now, it just looks like something that's stuck on each ear. Thanks!
Hi Hakadu. We have chosen you to be our final designer! We are excited to make the final revisions with your artwork. We are thinking of having the logo enclosed in a circle or oval, similar to what you did in entry #19 and 20, but without any curves following the logo. In other words, a smooth circle/oval. Would you please try some ideas for us to see if we like them? Thanks!
We have another suggestion, Hakadu. We hope you don't mind, but is there a way to combine the penguins from entry #98 and #96? You've shown us both standing and jumping, and we like the idea of the penguin "jumping" and having his legs up better because it shows "joy". We like entry #98, because he is looking at us and also because he is smiling. Can you make him jump? Make him look like he is really excited to be getting ice cream :) , Also, try doing another version of the above, and add an oval/circle around the perimeter of the entire design. THANK YOU!!! We are very happy to be working with you!
Entry #104 is our favorite, but we would like to see a few changes: try making the circle a little bit bigger, so that all of the words fit inside of it. (like entry #101). Keep the dark blue color for the circle, and make sure that the snowflakes are inside of the circle. We do not want the grey "swoosh" lines below the words. (the two curved lines below the words). If you need to make the circle an oval, so that it fits better, that is okay too. Whatever looks best. Or, you can try both an oval shape, and a circle, and we can decide. Thank you very much!!
Dear Hakadu, We love all four of these! You did a great job! Since this will be a family business, we want to wait until our kids get home from school so they can vote also. So we should have a final decision in about 4 hours. We will definitely be choosing one of these four, and you will be the winner:-). "Talk" to you soon!
Hello again, Hakadu! We have one final request, and you'll be finished. We have chosen #109 as our favorite. It looks GREAT!! If it's possible, we would like for you to make "The Freezing Pointe" just a little bit bigger, while keeping everything else exactly the same. We want to fill in the white space a little more. Thank you very much!!