The Don Hale TeamLogo Design Contest

A little too busy, Like the Don Hale, Having the blue in there is good, I thing the house is generally overused for real estate agents, but this looks good. The DH in the roof is good, but ma less busy, more solid. Is there any way to incorporate the commercial side. I may have to have two logos, one for residential, one for commercial. I hope this helps. I didn't think it would look as good as it does. I don't know if having fewer "family" members would make it less busy, as 5 members is a good number. Maybe four, but then the symmetry doesn't look as good. I hope this helps. Again, I love the Don Hale, big D, big H, and "the, and team" are a cool contrast to the red and white. Al", so, the "Call me" is a little weak, ( my bad) as we are a team, so, maybe "Call Us", or Call now?

Second Round, I like the color of the new number one, and the simpicity. It is real close to number Two, and I might change that. I like that the D in Don and the H in Hale are two tone, and that they are lowered, instead of raised, if that makes sense. I am still looking for the Commercial aspect, if possible. I love the colors of number one, but it needs a bit more red somewhere. These are good.

Looking good, I wonder if there is anyway to balance the roof to be less ridgid, and maybe balance the Swosh under "Hale." Number one is still my favorite.
Scotty B. Good off the wall stuff. That is what I am also interested in. The colors were looking a little muddied, so I put them in the "not as good" pile. I liked the background house, that could be more prominent, but at first, I thought it was a triangle person, not a house.
Heru, #7 is still in first place, but I like the Fade Red in #17, and the Green Swoosh in #13. So, if you could take #7, Do the dark to light in the name Don Hale, like in #17, and then use the lighter green Swoosh in #13, that is what I would like to look at. Also, to balance the green out, could you try it with the last letter, e, in the same green as the Swoosh?
As much as I like the first place right now, I am still looking for something more off the wall, that uses lots of red, and implies both commercial/industrial space as well as residential. Thanks.

Hern #29 can we try with the n and e in Blue, and maybe one without the roof.
Kid647 #35 I love the lowered D and H in my name, could you try with the roof a thin line. And is there some way to incormporate a commercial feel to the building, maybe a house out line and a building outline, but without being too busy.
Design Vine #39 Your roof is outside the box, so to speak. I love that, could you give it another go. I like the way you are looking at it.

Rogerson #45 Yes, thank you for incorporating both commercial and residential. Is it possible to get it less busy and more red. I do like the blue though. You are the first one to incorporate both! And maybe a splash of green?

Rogerson #45, less colors please, more red, And again, simpler. I love commercial and residential. Forget the blue.
#37 Please remove the house in the H, and can you incorporate commercial somehow? Good job, you have moved into first place.
#49 in Red, also, can we incorporate commercial please.

#52 Fastpencil Yes, commercial. Not bold /simple enough too busy
#51 too Busy, more commercial/residential, but I like the Pictograph slightly seperate from "The Don Hale Team"

#53 yes to Commercial/residential, but it is too confusing.

#49, same exact one only in red if you would. And maybe put a side, script "The" somewhere. Maybe not.

#75 In Darish Red, w/ back roof maybe, also another try without quite as much boldness
#49 Can you pit it in Red, and Aqaueeze the work "The " in there.I like the simplicity, but wish we could somehow put the commercial concept in there.
#37 Like the concept but needs somthing bolder, and no house in the "H".
#60 simplify the art, love the rest
#58 Anyway to incorporate a commercial concept?

#60 Change words last words to Call Now!

#75 All Red with a black roof please.

#60, Great, change to -Call Us- and I think that would retain first place.

The Winners are staying with a concept of residential and commercial. The simpler the design, the more I like it. I do like the "The Don Hale Team" and "Commercial and Residential" and "Call Us". I also like the fact that I can seperate the picture from the words, so that if I am limited in space, I can seperate them, or omit one or the other. I am so impressed with the creativity and clarity here.

The Winners are staying with a concept of residential and commercial. The simpler the design, the more I like it. I do like the "The Don Hale Team" and "Commercial and Residential" and "Call Us". I also like the fact that I can seperate the picture from the words, so that if I am limited in space, I can seperate them, or omit one or the other. I am so impressed with the creativity and clarity here.

Unicom #112, I love it. Can you try more red, to match the Keller Williams color scheme.

#114 Unicom Designs, love it,. Please make the following words darker. "The Team Residential Commercial Call Us " And I think that would be all. I really need to decide between the new one I just ask for, and 114, and 115.
Thanks so much, you incorporated everything I ask for with style!
Or, just maybe all words in that strong red, like in 114.