Hi Charles, Thanks for getting us started! I like the sense of movement. I prefer the thicker font of
#5. I quite like the grey - what will happen if I print this in black and white? Could you please take another look at my updates brief - I realised that I need the logo element to be hooked with my name, not the "Corporate Optimist" title - my current business card logo has been uploaded. I also still quite like the idea of an "echo" of the feeling of a slice of orange, although nowhere near as prominent as currently. Hope that helps and thanks again! Helen :)