Entry 10 - this is cool! Did you mean to change the tagline from "making success easier"? Could you substitute easier for better? I like the all gray text with colorful butterfly. I like the movement to the bultterfly . . . looks like its running or moving fast.
Really liking this! Could you give me an option similar to this but just a hair more whimsical - like a roadrunner butterfly, making it look like it's flying really fast?
Sure, I will do my best. Unfortunately, I need to step away from the computer for the rest of the evening but I will try to have something for you tomorrow.
No Problem. I like the idea of making the butterfly appear to be going even a little faster (not necessarily more whimsical, i.e. faster is more important to me than whimsical). I'm thinking the exact same butterfly but with a streak or extra shadow or something to make it appear to be moving fast. My potential customers equate "making success easier" with "making success faster" but keep the word easier.
For entry 13, could you change "better" to "easier" and what if the butterfly where emerging out of the open space from the C instead of appearing a little trapped?
I think I like your original the best. Can you take away the italics around "the" so that it looks more a part of the name of the company. I think perhaps best to leave it in same font.
For number 37, could you try a couple things: making The the same size and font as The Change Company, and experimenting with a darker blue for the bultterfly (perhaps a little more masculine, a little more safer/corporatey)?
Thinking I like 19 the best. I will keep the small italicized "The" for now as I don't want the name to sound like "THE CHANGE" corporation. The main reason I have "The" in the name is because my domain name has to have it.
I prefer the first butterfly over the one in which you darkened the back wing. Could you try leaving ithe butterfly the same as in 19 but changing the dark blue part of it to more of a navy blue (and leaving the light blue as is)?
Yes, I think 48 is what I was looking for. Can you make the light blue wing a little darker - just a little. I'm just trying to get it a little more masculine without losing creative . . . .
I'm getting feedback to keep the The the same size as everything else, like in your entry number 41. Also, I'm being asked to make the butterfly one color - like a dark blue. Not sure if that will work. I'll leave it to you if it needs a little contrast or not.
Also, I'm getting positive feedback on an option with a dark blue background, white text (more Corporate-y looking). A solid bright blue butterfly with bright blue tagline might work on this dark background.