Good effort, but the focus should be Green Way, not Camden. I like the "trail" but it doesn't have to bend back into itself, it could spread into space.
Interesting. I like this much better than Entry #2. Green Way is the focus which is very good. I like the gradient green letters. Is the shape around supposed to be a "C"? Pehaps a play on "GW" would work better, if that's possible.