Can you mess with 33 a little? I like the organic/fluid feel, but am a little confused as to why there are the vertical "support" lines on one side and not the other...Can you try a few more cuts that have the same fluid feel?
Can you make the Words "The Bridge Alliance" stronger. The shape of the bridge is a little on the feminine side, so I think it woul dmake sense to balance out with a strong font choice...