We really like the creativity of your symbol, yet it appears rather blurry and too abstract. We would love to see an iteration where your creativity is reflected, but more integrated within the writing itself. We want a symbol that is integrated with the writing yet could stand by itself for apparel or letterhead.
Your color palette is definitely akin to ours. I enjoy that your shade is not too stark or bold. We would love to see the addition of an alternate color. Also(and this may not be the right design terminology) we enjoy color gradation and shine. I hope you know what I mean.
The horizontal layout and lower case font are great, but would love to see a variation like the breathing room
Hey there - variation on the previous entry and new concept.
My thinking here is that in a world of chaos, we all need a "breathing room". The chaos is represented by the red and white turbulance, the breathing room is represented by the very calm green.
You clearly put a lot of thought into this one. I love what you are conveying, but I am having trouble with the red. To me the overall composition is thrown off by the agreement of the colors. I do like the storminess inside of the symbol, yet the shape is not quite hitting it. To me, it is looking a little like a spaceship.