I think I prefer the pole dancer image in #65 (stronger but still elegant) can you incorporate this into #57/63 type logo.
It you can also do some other layouts eg. Image with writing sitting next to rather than around. I'm ok with the slogan being dropped off if it makes the design appear cleaner.
#63 Change to the other pole girl. (Fitting inside the circle, #66 she is a little to big) and change slogan to cursive font like #72
#57 again change to other pole girl. But the opposite colours eg. Black girl, gold circle. Similar to #67 but the more golden brass and a black border around the circle. Also with cursive font for the slogan.
I prefer the text layout in #63 and #57 with the slightly larger and more prominent 'the brass room' to the #66 and #67 options.
Thank you for your quick turn around with changes! It is very much appreciated! :)
So I prefer the round layout of #74 and #75 to the ovel option of #77 and #78.
Can you widen the black border of #74 so there isn't a black and a gold ring, but only black. Also I'd like there to be a gap between 'the brass room' and 'private pole dancing studio' text if you need cut private off to make it fit you could try that? I really like the fonts used in #81, but I think the lettering over the image is too much.