The Brass RoomLogo Design Contest

Love the gold you have used! And the layout with the pole off the wording! Can you use a prettier pole image? More feminine with heels on?

I'm glad you like it! I have drawn a new image in #11. I have been aiming for a pose that shows strength as well as grace. I'll draw up another pose now as another option.
~Delilah

Image is heaps better!! I really like #12, much more graceful. Can you give her longer hair? Also try some other font options?

#16 Love the hair addition!! :)

I like the position of the 'the' better! But prefer the slogan at the bottom.

Not sure about the font..

Yeah I perfer that!! You could change the slogan to 'private pole studio' if it would fit better?

Good morning! Glad you like it. I was just having a fresh look at the fonts - I might try some other variations for you now.
Also - yes I will do up anotherversion with only "Private Pole Studio" as the tagline
~Delilah

Ok so looking at it with fresh eyes this morning!

Can you try the following: #12 add the image with the ponytail and remove the 'private pole studio' banner from the bottom altogether (I just want to get an idea of what it looks like without it). Also tuck the 'the' in like #17.

Good morning! Yes sure - I am onto it. I've got a big cup of coffee ready with fresh eyes and I'll have another crack at it now :-)
Thanks so much
~Delilah

Give me about an hour

Please see #25, plus I have added #26 and #27. I am also still playing with other fonts.
Thanks
~Delilah

Loving #25 and #27!! :) Can't wait to see the other fonts!

I think the font needs to be more modern and elegant.

Prefer the options without the slogan I think remove that now. :)

Sorry but I'm still not sold on the fonts! Can you keep with a caps rather than a lower case for BRASS ROOM and the perhaps use a cursive for the 'the'

Yes sure, no worries. I'll keep looking for that perfect font! Will submit some new options soon.
~Delilah

Thanks heaps :)