Thank you so much for your submission! There are things about this that I really like. Some of the detail on the character is very nice, mostly the lower half. I appreciate the Mercury head, but the mouth/jaw area is a bit too pronounced and I really don't know that I want a mask at all. The 'TBP' being worked into one logo on the chest is a really cool idea. The sun and rays are neat but the wrong colors. I like #28's sun and ray colors better. And I would really like to see the letters in small caps (all caps but the T, B, and P bigger caps) or at least like, "The Book Place" (caps for T, B, and P). I would like to see what an unclothed character like Atlas would look like, without showing any actual forbidden body parts, of course. The book and letters need more detail like #28.