The Body SmithLogo Design Contest

Maybe as this?

Hi,

Thanks for all your feedbacks, i'm working in the modifications, please check the shoulder , it's good?

Ok last idea: May I see it as YOU have it, blue, then white, but with the gray body? That may look better. Please let me compare? Thank you.

One last thing: May I see white BODY, blue SMITH, and gray muscle body? It is an idea for consistency that I would like to see. THANKS!

Ok man this is looking excellent! A few things:

~ May I see BODYSMITH with the same font style for both of them? I like the thicker SMITH a lot.

~ May I see a version of this with opposite colors for BODYSMITH. White BODY and blue SMITH.

~ Please put a little more white space between the H and the stomach muscles of the body. Looking for a little more separation for the eye.

~ THANK YOU for more muscles! Love them! However, your shoulder is a little "off" now. The top right shoulder muscles look like they are on top of the chest muscle now.

See how the line of the top shoulder of the "regular guy" on the left flows into the chest outline of the right? It's not correct. Please look at my first attachment with the card and correct. Slightly off...

~ May I see a version of this that has a more simple line for the "regular guy" chest? He is not developed so it would not be so obvious, and it does not have to match the right side chest. (Cannot look like a woman's breast though LOL!)

~ Please keep this colors as is for now. Please provide me with a white background version and black background version with each change if that is not too much trouble.

BigGenius, you have taken this design to the next level and I genuinely appreciate it!

I'll woriking in the he muscle art shape.
I'm preparing some options using your comments.
Slogan was removed.

From entry #82 to entry #88, I made some variations the royal blue color (sport colors)

Hi,

Thanks for the comments.
From entry #76 to the entry #81, you have some options with the fonts.
Let me know what is the better for you.
Thanks

THIS blue is closer. A little lighter blue.

See your white lines on the muscles? I want that white space to be negative/blank space for dark / colored T shirt backgrounds. The color behind will show through the space between the individual muscles.

This font is closer to what I like. More bold? Thicker? Heavier for Smith? Thanks!

Thank you! I'm still not seeing the font I want to use. I'm sorry. Not sure what to do... This is definitely closer.

I like the muscle art shape. However, can you please review the 1st card I attached. Please draw in more individual muscles -- genuine male anatomy of muscles -- and give me an example with more of them in your art? The shoulder, bicep area, forearm area.

Please remove the Anybody can be... slogan.

The blue should be more like "sports team blue". I don't know how to translate that. Royal blue...

THANK YOU!

Hi,
Thanks for all your feedback.

I worked in the silhouette of the body so you can show through of the shirt, thicker lines, also made changes in the tagline. Let me know if everything is fine or if you need more modifications.

Thanks
BG

This is not what I asked for BUT I love it! Its why I love this contest.

Comments:

~ I need a lot more muscle detail on the right side, especially the stomach muscles. Because all of the "art" is to the right of the clear lettering, I think this can be highly detailed.

The other reason why I would like individual muscle detail is so that there is white / blank space between them -- as in my example. This way the color of the shirt can show through these blank line areas of the muscles.

With that in mind, the lines used for the regular body on the left side need to be thicker and more definite. Maybe try not connecting them as one line perfectly? Maybe pieces that together form the regular body? Ideas...

Why? Because the white area of your design on the left side will be a T-shirt color and show through.

Hand design: May I see both one with your present relaxed hand, and one with a fist, wound up hand?

Lettering: Love how you have BODY and SMITH different colors. Let's keep that. And I like that whatever color we use for SMITH will match the muscle portions of the right side.

I believe THE and the slogan below should be the same color, not as it is now.

Important: Let's use the same font for both BODY and SMITH. Let's keep that please. But, let's try a more athletic, college team style lettering for BODYSMITH.

Slogan: We have plenty of white space between BODYSMITH and the fist/hand, so let's lower the slogan just a bit, not too much, for more white space.

Also, it needs to either be legible or not there at all. I like keeping it smaller width vs BODYSMITH, so let's try enlarging it from between the B and O of BODY to between the T and H of SMITH as you currently have it.

I'm going to ask you for brighter coloring but let's get all this art stuff down and move forward from there.

BigGenius, this is the first design I'm genuinely excited about, so THANK YOU!!