For #30, would you please try making the woman's stance slightly different? Maybe with her legs further apart as though she's leaping or climbing? Maybe experiment with the colors in the words, too. I like the color combination, but am thinking making the word "strong in the brown color so that your eye goes from connection to strong? Thank you.
I'm sorry we keep going back and forth, with different things catching our eyes as the hours tick by. I'm not allowed to reference other designers' work, so I'll try to describe it. For number 30, would you please try making the B of Body "capitalized" or larger than the "ody", and put "The" on top of "ody" so that there's a diagonal line from THE to STRONG? Sure hope this makes sense. Also, Traci would like to see the font a little bolder, showing strength. Thank you.
Nice! For 117 would you please make BODY in caps with the B larger than the ody? Put the THE on top, therefore the tag line is not pushed over by the dangling Y. Therefore there'll be a nice diagonal between The and Strong. Thank you
GREAT! Thank you! Okay only two more things... and thank you for your patience as we vacillate back and forth! For # 88, would you please try making the B slightly less bolded OR making the rest of Body as bold as the B (if that'll work with the intertwined letters... or if you have another idea we're open.
For both 88 and 123, we really like the colors combined as they are, but just for comparison would you please play with other colors? It's possible we'll stick with what you've got here, but we'd like to see your other ideas. Thank you!
Thank you. For # 88, would you please try making the "Body" all in the same font, either all bold or all not bold? Thank you. Also, would you please try this design in a deep teal color? Either with the gray accent or brown or whatever you think will go with the teal. Thanks again.