The image you suggested is not 'there' yet, but may have some potential. The use of color and focus with the image is good - but it needs some clarification. The words need to be grouped as follows: Becoming An on one line and INDISPENSABLE PARTNER on the second line (drop the word program). The subtext needs to be stronger and bolder.
Thanks for the feedback,Sir.. I will make some revisions for wording..and try to find some ideas to improve the image (logo). will resubmit soon when I'm done..
Image #82 have more relevance to me than #83 - perhaps because with the right and left sides NOT connected suggests 2 reaching for the center, while the other just looks like a 'X' which does not have relevance.
I would suggest toning down the 'Becoming An' and not making it italicized. It is far less important than the "Indispensable Partner" which is our branding phrase, and should be the focal point of the title.