Textbook AssaultLogo Design Contest

Hi, here's my initial outline for the character design. Just wanted to show you how it looks before I colorize it. Let me know whether I'm on the right track or not

Thanks!

Best,
Ryo

#5 Ryo,

Awesome! Definitely on the right track

Maybe there's a way you can incorporate textbooks though

great! here's the colorized version #6
i have a plan to add the books in front of the bull so it will looks the bulls gonna crash the books using his weapon. what so you think?

thanks for the rank, greg!

best,
ryo

I think that would be a good idea. Maybe also try putting the books in the bull's right hand.

After the coloring, the armor looks a little too much like a uniform. Kind of looks like this: http://cdn.buzznet.com/assets/users16/pattygopez/default/white-goodman-dodgeball-true-underdog--large-msg-132259950812.jpg . Maybe we can change that up somehow.

Okay greg, no problem. Will be back soon with the updates

Thanks!

done, please check the newest entries and let me know what you think

Thanks Greg!

Best,
Ryo

#17 #16 I like the new coloring on them and the redesign of the armor a lot. I actually liked the implied motion of the ball and chain before, but I understand that we might have to make it louder because of the strength of the "textbook assault" lettering. Can you switch it to the old ball and chain motion to see what it looks like?

Thanks Ryo!

#17 #16 also can we make the boots look less like platform shoes?

Done #26 #27 #28 #29

#31 this looks awesome. Let's take off the tag line.

Can we play around with different fonts/styles for "Textbook Assault"?

#32 great, maybe let's try a black or gray border?

#29 this is perfect as a standalone image. Thank you!

Cool updates, but like both original better (#43 #32)