The logo attached to the brief was a guide. I like what you have done with the logo. The two point I did not like about the original logo I attached was the length of the arms and how the body tailed off at the end. If there is a way of reducing the arm length and increase the low body to a simiar style of that of #3
On #3 could you change 'Technical Excellence in Athletic Movement' to the same colour as #2 without the grey background. Is there a way of filling in the 'EAM' in either grey or blue. When changing the 'EAM' to blue, change the type below to grey without a background colour. I think this logo may have the potential to be our preferred out of the 4 you have listed once changed.
On #2, could you use the logo from #3 and its dimensions (not a complete circle so has a flat edge. This may allow for the blue text below to be extended below the logo and title.
#6 looks really good. Would it be possible to use this updated logo on #1 - keeping the logo within the top and bottom edges of the text and also another with the both bottom edges in line.
Also #6 could you change the TEAM into grey text and the text below in blue
On #4 would it be possible to outline EAM in blue.
#9 is getting really close to what we are looking for. With the logo, could you increase the size of it so that the bottom edge is still in line with the bottom edge of the text but does not have to be inline with the top edge.
Also could we see what the 'TEAM' and text below would like as a single colour.
Looking really fantastic. We have decided that having TEAM and the logo separate works best.
These are the definite's we want to keep: TEAM in blue Technical Excellence in Athletic Movement in grey. Text and logo separate so the logo does not make the letter T of TEAM.
So want we want to be able to do is to have TEAM and the logo used separately as well as together. What you have done with #23 looks awesome. We really like the this design and sticks out as the most powerful one for us. One thing we would like to try is in the logo to remove the lanes and fill with a grey scale below the arms (dark to light moving down the logo). We want to see if this works or if we lose the context of the logo. If it does then we will revert to the logo design in #23.
This is very close to what we are looking for.
Please feel free to drop more comments on if want more info from us.
Hello Alex, here are couple of revisions you asked for. I`ve added some gradient instead of lanes and also put some on font. Let me know what you think, or if you have any other specific instructions. Best regards, Bob.
Thanks for the revisions. As you can probably tell now, we are very close to what we want!
#23 is the closest. We would like to keep the lanes in as keeps the context of the logo. Could you put the grey gradient on to this with darker grey at the bottom with lighter grey towards the arms. Also could you bring the logo down to the bottom of the text like #22.
Last request - #22. Could you change the TEAM into blue so we can compare it with #23 - not sure what looks best with the smaller text (having it under the logo and TEAM or just under TEAM).
Hello Alex, just to let you know that I will post the changes you requested in two maybe three hours, because I`m not at my office computer right now. Also, during the judging mode you can ask for any further revisions, so if there would be anything else you may need, I can do it then. Thanks for understanding, best regards, Bob.