Tech CanaryLogo Design Contest

Greetings, this is my first proposal for competition #21 , any comment is welcome

Many thanks

Thanks, I like the creativity of what you have done.

#56

Thanks! I like that one better. keep them coming!

Thanks for the comments and the classification, please if you have any suggestions I would like to make me know
#66
#67

thank you very much

Thanks. Looking good!

any comment?

looking good so far. Can you extend the wings or make them bigger. It is starting to look like a humming bird.

Thanks, looking good. Can you try to make it more slender? Maybe get rid of the piece that looks gray. Also can you maybe add some facial features (eyes, nose, etc). I don't know if this would look good with your design but I am just curious. One last thing we were thinking of using some sort of Circuitry to bring out the "Tech" Thanks four your help.

#93

Looking good. I defiantly like the bird better but am not sure about the lines.

thank you very much for your comments, I use this picture as a reference

http://clasev.net/v2/pluginfile.php/30952/course/section/14620/circuito2.jpg

Maybe you have another to go with it to try to reach more quickly what you want, of equal way keep working on new proposals

(Excuse the English, not speak and use the traducctor of google)

thank you very much

An Idea: Maybe take an Image

https://www.google.com/search?q=Circuit+board&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=m_zhUZSBLJDHywHtl4G4AQ&ved=0CFMQsAQ&biw=1280&bih=679#facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=lZtutJOSJdpMZM%3A%3B8iR4myLzXdT0mM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.pcbunlimited.com%252Fimages%252Fcircuit_board_layout.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.pcbunlimited.com%252Fprinted-circuit-boards.php%3B1449%3B757

Or

https://www.google.com/search?q=Circuit+board&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=m_zhUZSBLJDHywHtl4G4AQ&ved=0CFMQsAQ&biw=1280&bih=679#facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=Wif-6invBbaJlM%3A%3BS8oc7YVtNHDnOM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fyourwallpaper.com%252Fwallpapers%252Fgeneral_abstract%252Fcircuitboard01-1024.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fyourwallpaper.com%252Fabstract%252Fcircuitboard01-1024.phtml%3B1024%3B768

Or what ever you think.

And Just implant it into the belly of the bird as if it is controlled by the Chip. (I just googled Circuit Board) It can be small or large I will leave it up to you.

Nice! 102 looks good. If it is possible fade the lines at the ends so it looks like they go under the skin. Also if you can add some more detail to the center belly chip (the square)

Sure.

#104

Thank you very much for the rating, if you want it tomorrow, first thing I'm going to make all the changes you request, for now good night

any comments?

Looking good! I like both the wings up and the wings down. Can you do some more work on the chest Circuit board. it is starting to look like a shield.

Disregard the last comment. I would like to see how it looks without the circuits. You have done a very good job on the bird and I may be over complicating it. Also if you haven't already please read the comments posted on the main page.

Thanks!

I'll be working on a new combination of colors, will be ready in a minute

In entry #195 I'm trying to get away a bit of the style of the triangles, because a designer who ranked first in the ranking is accusing me of having copied his design style "robotic" of which differ completely.

thanks

LOL, I know which designer you are talking about. Theirs was way different. Anyways I like the new design. Also I am liking the Orange color. Can you add some variations of color to the new design? Maybe one with a hint of orange/yellow?

Thanks you so much for understand, now what you think about #196

Looks good! Can you add a hint of blue to #196? Maybe a stripe along the breast of the bird but it is up to you. I trust your advise.

Add the blue in the head because in the chest seems out of place, what you think? #167

I think I like just the yellow of 196

In the design #199 I'm trying to get away over the triangles, in this case the wings

I still like #196 because it looks like a wing. 199's wings is starting to look funny. Maybe send some more.

#200

The wings with corners rounded #201

I like the sharpness of the wings and back of #196 but I like what you have done to 201 with the head. Can you sharpen the wings of 201 and maybe make its back a tad bit straighter? Lastly can you maybe add some feet? Play around with it to see if it will look good.

Also please play around with the text. I am really thinking of going with lower case letters.

I really want to stick with the wings the way that they were.

what you think about #202, only the position of the wings, I think it already solved the problem of misunderstanding, will work in the text

I like the old position

looks good! I want to end the contest early. Can you do some more work on the coloring around the head one spot looks almost white and there looks like there is a redline next to the wing.

Looks good. Can you see if you can fix the red line on the wing?

its the line on top of the wing next to the body.

sorry for the delay I had some problems with the internet now working on the changes I requested, they will be done shortly

#208, not sure this is what you wanted because I have some problems with the translation, I do not speak English and I use the google translator.

Tell me what you think

thank you very much

Looks good you fixed the red but now there is a yellow line. Can you just make it so that there is no line?

You fixed it. Now can you darken the body slightly?

Sorry I meant just under the wings not the head. (where the curve starts on the Neck) so take 208 and darken the body under the neck line that is curved.

Nice job! I am happy with # 211 and am ready to end the contest. I have one favor. When you send me the files can you send me to me #211, One like #203 (centered over the text) but with #211's Bird. and 2 more like the previous that but the text says Canary AMS and lastly just the bird by its self. Please let me know and I will end the contest with you as the winner.

Thank you very much by take into consider my work, of course I I can send those versions alongside some other that'll be preparing

regards