I would like to thank you for the seven logo designs that you've submitted for the logo contest. I appreciate all the effort you've taken to enter these fine design since my local contests and I will do anything I can to help you win. What I'd like to do is I'd like to focus on what we can do with the locals who submitted to when the contest. therefore I'd really like to focus on local entries 131, 127 and 137.
these logos are obviously emulating a slinky device. Unfortunately having a slinky in your logo is a bit of a copy cat type of presentation. to what I don't want to do is have a logo that when people look at it say ahh he makes Slinkys.
so what we can do is talk about how we can take this spring device in simplified into logo that maybe has one and a half turn of the wire spring with the wire or to the left setting it on the ground of the logo showing some sort of recycling energy concepts related to the gyrating mechanics of the human foot as it plans on the ground.
⤵↗ this right here might be the simplest symbolic representation of recycling of energy through the foot plant of the human body during walking and running with some changes on the second arrow having the Arrow or spring actually bent down to about half way down as if it's first rising up at a 45° angle and then leveling off moving forward.
see if you can just develop some sort of logo designer couple simple ones with this arrow showing the mass impacting the ground springing off and rejecting forward over the top of the team doctors written logo. That could be the winner
Please feel free to contact me at anytime with any new logo designs through a feedback message so I can see the changes that you have made faster a set of having to look them up
Thank you so much for all your efforts. I really want you to win so let's do it
Number 138 etc with the slinky feet is not an engineering design.
Drop the slinky concept and simplify the logo with lines to show direction of a falling object recoiling off the ground fighting the earths gravity
You seem to be pretty good at keeping things simple and understandable so I'd like to give you a hint as to what might work to allow you to morph this design into something that will win. What you can do is just try to understand how objects fall towards the ground according to the gravitational pull of the Earth, then elastically recoil off of the ground projecting forward into space.
This recycling of energy is best happened when the human spring mechanism is released, strengthened and supercharged. That's what team doctors is all about. So if you can figure out how to get this concept of an object falling from the sky deforming its physical shape, storing energy within and the formation process, then returning back to its original shape releasing that energy, to project the object forward, then maybe might have a winning logo.
1. It shows the landing phase of the human foot, the impact with the ground as well as the push off.
2. It makes reference to the downward spiral of health then the intervention with Team Doctors and the improvement of health with the upward arrow.
Here is how you make this logo a winner
Somehow put the arrow graphic to the left and in some way show how the intervention of Team Doctors springs the health back.
a. You can do this by showing the relationship in some way with the upward arrow and the Team Doctors. Dont mix the arrow with the T in Team Doctors I dont like that but use your imagination to see what you can come up with .
This more simple logo is gaining on the others and may be a winner if some simple changes are made as it is like a swoosh with many meanings which are better than the swoosh
Try some different arrow configurations but just do one or two of your very best
# 175 is the closest but we need to think about some theoretical models to get this concept
The future is always to the right therefore this is how it works
The person has a downward slide of their health (that is the arrow downward to the ground The person comes in contact with Team Doctors, bounces out of the downward spiral and the line sails above the Team Doctors lettering to life a long life
The downward arrow is short and angled down with a steady curve The bounce happens close to the Team Doctors lettering The arrow sails above Team Doctors and into the future