Teaching Firms of America (TFOA)-Professional Preparatory Charter SchoolLogo Design Contest

Regards
Buddiarto

Thanks for your submission--I like what you've done here, but please take a look at my early general comments to Xyan's submissions, namely around colors (black and bright gold (closer to yellow)), and my preference for the making "Professional Preparatory" the most prominent words in the logo ...

Thanks again and look forward to seeing your changes.

Rafiq

Here is my new entry, what do you think?

Thanks
Buddiarto

(This comment references Entry #11)

I really like #11--it is one of my top 3 choices, but I don't know that I like this particular rounded shape--can you keep the design intact but alter the shape to a more 'sharp', strong image? I know there are only a few hours left in the tournament but this could make all of the difference ...

Rafiq

I really like #12 too, but have a similar concern about the overall shape of the logo as I do with #11 ...

Actually the more and more I reflect on your designs the more I like them ... but again they lack the "strength" of some of the other designers' submissions ... I would like to see #12 revised more clearly highlight the student image (I like the student-image in gold (definitely did not like the white from entry #13)), and again would love the overall shape to be sharper, more of an angular-shield (I have the same critique about the banner at the bottom of the logo: I like the flare from #11 at the very bottom, but in both #11 an #12 I'd like the banner to be more sharp and angular). Finally I was hoping you would consider working in (subtly) "TFOA" into the design (perhaps in the color block beneath the student-image?) ...

Thanks so much for your submissions and hard work in my contest--looking forward to seeing your revisions!

Rafiq

here are my revision

thanks,
Buddiarto

Thanks for the revisions--I like where you are going with #39 and #40 ... I'd like to see black dominate more of the background in #39 like it does in #40--I particularly want to see the the student image (with the TFOA lettering) set off a bit from the banner ...

Thanks again for the revisions ... looking forward to the updates.

Rafiq

Thanks for the revisions--I like where you are going with #39 and #40 ... I'd like to see black dominate more of the background in #39 like it does in #40--I particularly want to see the the student image (with the TFOA lettering) set off a bit from the banner ...

Thanks again for the revisions ... looking forward to the updates.

Rafiq

Thanks for the revisions--I like where you are going with #39 and #40 ... I'd like to see black dominate more of the background in #39 like it does in #40--I particularly want to see the the student image (with the TFOA lettering) set off a bit from the banner ...

Thanks again for the revisions ... looking forward to the updates.

Rafiq

Here are another revision that I make
with a golden thick lines for the student image, with more black backgound

(This comment references Entry #46)

This one only the TFOA without the thick line, in a horizontal layout

(This comment references Entry #47)

This one only TFOA, but the TFOA is paralel with the banner

Thanks,
Buddiarto

(This comment references Entry #48)

In this one i added a horizon to support the student image and its represent always think toward to the future, and always a head thinking

(This comment references Entry #49)

Black Banner

thanks,
Buddiarto

(This comment references Entry #55)

Thanks so much for your hard work and amazing entries into my contest! I really like your work and will definitely be taking one of your designs into the judging phase ...

I was that you could serve up a version of #49 without the heads-images, instead with only the 3 graduation caps (perhaps with tassels hanging down from each one)--please keep the exact same set up, but I'd like to see what it looks like without the heads but with the grad caps).

Thanks!

Rafiq

With Tassle

(This comment references Entry #86)

only grad caps with tassle and yellow gold color

(This comment references Entry #81)

only grad caps with tassle and black color variation

(This comment references Entry #82)

grad caps with tassle and tube black color variatons

(This comment references Entry #83)

grad caps with tassle and tube gold yellow color variatons

(This comment references Entry #84)

grad caps with tassle line trough the center off the cap top, with gold yellow color variatons

(This comment references Entry #85)

Here is the revision from #40

(This comment references Entry #87)

10-15% resize Student and grad cap

(This comment references Entry #88)

Resize teacher student

(This comment references Entry #89)

With Student with grad cap and tassle resize 10-15%

(This comment references Entry #90)

Here are the revision

(This comment references Entry #91)

Gold dominant

(This comment references Entry #92)

Here it is black black dominant with TFOA text from #40

(This comment references Entry #93)

Here it is Gold dominant with TFOA text from #40

(This comment references Entry #94)

Here is the # 40 Central image

(This comment references Entry #95)