Hi there Here are my initial presentations for you #11, #12 has the golden egg in between Tax and Free in place of the Dash in #11 the white Highlight on the flag is Dash in Tax-Free. =)
#15 - #16 has the Negative space for Tax Free and A Banner type for #15
I like #16 because it is very clean and professional, the other I discarded because they feel sort of cartoonish or more like a banner for a county fair. Can you play around with #16 and some variants of that? Thanks. I like it.
After my daughter (who has a very artistic eye) looked at these she really liked #16 with the egg in the blue banner. I do as well. However, I'm not sure it's totally there yet. I like the clean, crisp, classic look. You can see I discarded all the stars, $ signs, and other things that folks have tried to fit in there. I would like to have a logo, however, that not only achieves this look but also has an emblem (Like Apple) that could stand alone by itself (without words) and be a recognizable branding symbol. Think Apple computer when you submit others. Thanks.
Also, feel free to put your own spin on it if you have some creative ideas outside of what I've requested. Thanks.
Wow thanks! I do have lots of ideas on hand like the egg with Halo and wings, A flag hand or hand holding it, TFR on the Egg, the Egg with a crown, with a ribbon like the ones they used on prize on contests, A key hole or the egg as a padlock, and some iconic retirement objects like the egg on a comfty couch or a rocking chair
Love the keyhole and key idea. That makes all the difference in the world. I'm going to pick my two favorite's with the keyhole ... then can we play around with it a bit. I love what you've done with the banner so that is good. Let's try the same look but without a banner and with the clean simple text like in #12 - really like that clean text look. Also, I really want to be able to clip out the egg and key as a stand alone symbol/emblem that would be readily recognizable. I think you've nailed the idea, let's just refine ut a bit and play around with it. Great job!
#51 has the perfect look and relationship between key and egg. Love it. Let's take that configuration of egg/key and play with it. Don't add, let's take away. Simple. Classic. Refined. Look. However, for the record, I like #51 well enough as it is. Just want to see what else we can create. You never know it for sure til you see it. Thanks for your work.