Thank you for your entry. Although I like it, there is a bit too much going on it. I am looking for something cleaner and simpler, but still with a strong emphasis on the top 3 things to communicate (see contest brief).
Hi, Thanks so much for the feedback and the ranking. When I get home from work this evening I will revise and simplify my design and resubmit for your review. Pam
Hi, Here's a revision of entry #6. I simplified the wings, made the text the same color, and simplified the gradients overall. Please let me know if you'd like it further simplified. I kept the gradients because your brief specified Web 2.0 as a style you would consider. But if you'd rather see it completely flat color just let me know. I'd be happy to make any changes you might want. Thanks for the feedback! Pam
Thank you for the edits. Although the design is better, it is still not quite what I am looking for. What I meant before by too much going on in the design is that the combination of the wording in the oval shape, the wings and the halo together looks like too many elements in the design. I like each of the elements on their own,but all of them together is too much.
I would love it if you could somehow refine these elements or better still create new logos with different aspects from these elements.
Hi Robert, Thanks for the feedback. #51, #52 and #53 are further revisions of my initial designs. Per your request, I used the same elements, but refined and arranged them in a less cluttered way. Let me know if any of these appeals to you, and if you would like further refinement of any of them. Thanks so much! Pam