#103, please put a slight break between the T and the 3. Have the left line of the Y (the chimney) be longer, so the letter Y that the roof line makes is more obviously a letter Y. Adjust MANAGEMENT accordingly. Thank you.
#107, please separate the T and the 3 so there is no kerning. Have the top of the three extend straight on the same plane as the top of the T. Have the end of the top of the 3 line up with bottom of the 3. I preferred the original left roof line extending down to line up with the bottom of MANAGEMENT, as you have it in #103. I wanted you to move the roof to the right, so you could move the left line of the Y further down the roof, so it looked more like a Y. Don't have the left line of the Y extend above the the other letters in the word PROPERTY. Thank you.
I have done the changes, what you think of these additional changes.#108
The T and the 3 are now seperate, I understand about the NO KERNING....would you like to top T touching the 3?......three lines extend at same of the T. I lined up the two lines with the bottom 3. and put it to the original way..and put the "chimney" to the right.