Thanks... will think about it more... believe me I understand your criteria my main business is printing on merchandise. AND I know what the client wants they get as well...everyone had different taste.
I looked at your portfolio again. You have a lot of really nice stuff, very refined solutions. This one just seems a little "clunky" to me.
As I mentioned, the client has chosen 5 designs that they like, but the final decision hasn't been made. Check out their top 5 choices and see what you think.
Well, our client likes it. I think it does look too "collegiate" though. I also think the way the "T"s are repeated is a little busy. I'd leave this one in there, the way it is, but if you have any ideas of how to improve it, we'd love to see them as well.
One thing... I think "SOLUTIONS" is too small. One of my tests for a good logo is, will it reproduce smaller? An obvious test is... would it work on a business card? I think if this were to be reduced to work on a normal business card, "SOLUTIONS" would be too small, and the repeated "T"s, would turn into a little blob.
Our client likes this design as his 4th choice so far! If you have any tweaks on this design, now would be the time. Tomorrow is the end of the "Open Phase". Great Job!
We are the ad agency for the T-Sim Solutions. I am not sure if they want anyone to know their Umbrella Company's name. I'll have to find out. If they don't mind, I'll get you a link to the video. I just have to get permission first.
good feedback... because i am in the promotional products industry I believe some of my suppliers use this type process.
if you have a link to the video it might help... I will try other things.
Hi BusinessBuilders,
You have the right idea with the "repeated shapes" of the "T" in your design, but keep in mind that in the process of "transfer dies", a blank piece of metal gets stamped once, then moves to the next die and gets stamped, an so on, multiple times.
So, there is more of a time-line of movement, or a horizontal process.
Also, your choice of fonts looks more like a college football team font.
Also, if you feel hindered by using the tagline, you don't have to work that into your logo solutions. We can add it later.
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you will also want a 1 color version.. will show that as well.
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As I mentioned, the client has chosen 5 designs that they like, but the final decision hasn't been made. Check out their top 5 choices and see what you think.
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One thing... I think "SOLUTIONS" is too small. One of my tests for a good logo is, will it reproduce smaller? An obvious test is... would it work on a business card? I think if this were to be reduced to work on a normal business card, "SOLUTIONS" would be too small, and the repeated "T"s, would turn into a little blob.
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I can offer a couple of options... do you think the font is still to "collegiate"? will try others.
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if you have a link to the video it might help... I will try other things.
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You have the right idea with the "repeated shapes" of the "T" in your design, but keep in mind that in the process of "transfer dies", a blank piece of metal gets stamped once, then moves to the next die and gets stamped, an so on, multiple times.
So, there is more of a time-line of movement, or a horizontal process.
Also, your choice of fonts looks more like a college football team font.
Also, if you feel hindered by using the tagline, you don't have to work that into your logo solutions. We can add it later.