Great start! Like the color scheme of entry #17 the best, but all three are nice and clean. Great job incorporating the stick guy character. Would like to see a different approach as to how the 'T-300' is presented. Also, we think the girl's arm should be separate from the lacrosse stick, but otherwise great job so far!
The update looks great! One of our objectives is not only to create a fun, attractive logo for girls, but also deliver a sense of prestige about the event. Therefore, could we see the word showcase in a different a font? Thanks again!
Can you see an image without any cursive in it? I like the depth in images #25 & #26 but we want something that is the perfect blend of fun and prestige in the same image.
This looks really good, we like what you did with the font and that swoosh design at the bottom is stellar. We wondering if you could present them in a few different color patterns so we get an idea as to how it would look in different formats.
Thank you for your comments and the ranking! I did some new color combinations for you to look at. Please see #47, #48, #49 and #50. Please let me know if you have any color combinations that you would like to see. I would be happy to try any ideas that you have. Thanks, Leah
Thank you for the color reworks! I have two pieces of feedback from one of the principles that may get us a closer to a final design. First, they are not a fan of purple. Could we possibly see a color combinations with blue, gold, and red? Secondly, could we potentially get a more serious/realistic girl in the image? I think they would like to see the character in the logo have a more proportional lacrosse stick and more serious pose.
We love the color scheme on #54 & #52 & #53! I think we are getting close, just a couple more pieces of feedback by one of the principles. They would like the hyphen removed between the T-300 and to be T300 instead. Second, we really like the gradient feature on #51 and we would like to see that on #54 & #52.
They would also like to see a palmetto tree instead of the palm tree in the design. I've a link to the South Carolina State flag for further reference as to what they are looking for:
Lastly I don't know if there is any way to bring the stick guy character in more prominently in the image, but they would like to see if there is any other way we can incorporate it to make it stand out more.
Can we see that T300 logo with in the Blue Color you used in #54 with a gradient? Sorry to be nitpicky, essentially we love the color scheme for the #54, just with the elements you included in #57.
In terms of the tree, still needs some work to be thinned down more like the other palmetto tree (#22) in the other logo. The stick is still kind of awkward looking to me too. It needs to be much smaller and more angular with the side wall lines. I would take out the ball. I would move the tree to the left a bit. I would also try adding T3 logo in the sun rather than on the shirt.
I think the branches are closer to what our principle is looking for, but she is really keen on having the tree aligned further to left. Essentially, she would like the trunk of tree to extend to the swoosh at the bottom. She feels as though it looks attached to the player. Scrap the ball, she doesn't want that included in the final design.
And she is also keen about incorporating the stick guy character into the sun. Maybe potentially make the player smaller to include more room?
If you could do one with just the tree adjustment and another with player/stick guy adjustment so that I could show her the contrast, I would appreciate.
I think we're getting close, thank you again so much!
"We think the t3 logo (stick guy image) needs to stay straight up and down in #64. Try smaller logo on player in entry #65 (like in #63), and real small on right side of sun in the other, keeping girl much smaller to give enough room."
Essentially, shrink the logo on the girls chest back to original size from previous entries in #65. Then in the image where their logo is in the sun, straighten it out, shrink the player down even further, and then shrink their logo in the sun to fit accordingly.
As I've mentioned before, we have a partner that we are working with to create the logo for this event. She owns the brand (i.e. Stick guy/T3 character) and is trying to see ways in which we can make the figure stand out in the current logo. We don't want you to think we are leading along, we just want to keep you up-to-date as to what is going on our end. She has a major tournament that she is running this weekend and won't be around to answer feedback until Monday. But, we promised we would get some designs samples that she can look at so that we can come to a conclusion by then.
Here are her requests:
"I like #68, but I would like to see the girl slightly smaller and the T3 guy slightly smaller as well. I’d like to see the T3 guy in the upper right part of the sun. For the first one, #66, the T3 guy should be straight up and down even though girl is leaning."
For #66, you may have to shrink the T3 guy a little bit to get the desired, straight up-and-down effect she is looking for. She is okay with that.
My apologies again if it seems like we are dragging this process along, that is not our intent. Thank you again for patience and hopefully this should all be wrapped up by Monday!
Please see #69 and #70. I will also be out of town for the weekend for my son's travel baseball tournament. I am planning to take my laptop but will not have internet access most of the weekend as I will be at the fields. If I do not hear from you over the weekend we will pick back up on Monday. Have a great weekend!