SwimtopiaLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the submission

What I like:
- The geometric design of the pool umbrella
- the 'shadow' in the design
- use of color

What I don't like:
- the umbrella is too big, it overwhelms the wordmark
- the pole of the umbrella, the 't' in the topia, does not align with the top/point of the umbrella
- the umbrella looks lop-sided, what if it had only 3 panels?
- the font selection is too stylized and too thin, would like something a bit more substantial in the font style
- would like to see a color other than grey for the type

Thanks again!

A revision -- hope this addresses your concerns. Additional feedback always welcome.

(This comment references Entry #18)

Thanks for the update. Yes, I like this much better. This is very nice.

Some suggestions:
- Perhaps the 'S' should be larger/capitalized to balance with the umbrella?
- Would like to see color variations, in particular different blue(s), I also liked the green and purple from the first concept

First revision, showing a lighter "swimming pool blue" color for the font, as well as a slightly larger "S". Also, using the green and purple umbrella colors.

(This comment references Entry #65)

Second version, showing option of a richer blue, and a larger "S".

(This comment references Entry #66)

The next 4 submissions use the richer blue and larger "S", and show a variety of umbrella color options. Please feel free to mix and match any of the options -- or suggest different avenues. I don't want to overwhelm you with too many choices just now, but am certainly willing to explore any combinations!

(This comment references Entry #67)

The "o" becomes a gold medal, with hints of blue ribbons, and also a sun, with sky and water surrounding...

(This comment references Entry #133)