Thanks for the submission!
What I like:
- the color selection
- the gradient / style
- like the swimmer concept
- the bold font-styling
What I don't like:
- the swimmer looks too 'pointy', even dangerously sharp or weaponlike. Doesn't evoke the 'friendly' / 'easy' feeling we're going for
- would make more sense for the 'swim' to be blue and the 'topia' to be green
- the configuration with two swimmers in
#13 and
#14 seems odd because they are pulling in opposite directions. Perhaps if it were done with both facing the same direction - where it represents a single swimmer half above and half below the water line? Not sure though...
- the font selection is bold (which I like), but the typeface is a bit too rigid, I'd rather see something rounder and more inviting
- the literalness of the design
- the design is too focused on the 'swim' and not enough on the 'topia'