We like the general idea. please try to use all the colors. The charitable part of the graphic is not immediately apparent. A change of color may refocus this.
Hi there. We are struggling with the red background. Could we go back to entry #51 (with the white background) and use a larger, more modern font? Also could you try to put sweet charity (in gold) on the top line and desserts (in red) underneath. Try lowercase only.
Spacing - could you put more space between the logo and the lettering.
We like the 2 people underneath, but would like you to make them more noticeable - one idea is to put a line to delineate the bottom of the cake against the plate.