SustainaVilleLogo Design Contest

Great. Is #428 dark enough?

Hey, we can lose the plug- sorry about that!

Let's see the dark gray for the text, and then also a black/white version.

Here's the version without the plug.

If there's no way that we could lose the plug then I guess we designers will work it out between us somehow.

Hi Kim, I have other designers claiming the plug element in my design and clearly I'm in the wrong here since I only introduce this (your request) after the blind phase has ended. Is there a chance we could lose the plug? Otherwise I'm gonna have to split the prize with two other designers. Thank you.

Alright! One more tweak, could we see the text in a slightly darker gray? After that, I think we could be set!

Also:

Please put the plug back by the sun and restore the arrow

Looking good!

-Can you cut the left bush off at the arrow line instead of having it hang down?

-Can you make the smaller buildings to the left and right of the triple decker a darker blue so the triple decker stands out?

-Can you add one more ray to the sun, on the right side?

-Also it looks like there's a red line on the powder house still, if we could fix that.

Thanks!

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Thank you for the updates!

Let's try removing the plug from the sun and replacing the arrowhead with the plug.

Lets go back to gray text for Sustainaville.

Could you also make the powder house the same orange as the sun?

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On it

Hey! Sorry for the late reply. We have a few more tweaks we'd like to make before we finalize it:

Could we incorporate an electric plug into the design?
it could be added to the front end of the green line, the tail of the little e in Ville, the capital S in SustainaVille, or wherever you think it would look good.

Can we try a darker blue for the text, but keeping "Sustaina" bolded?

I liked the red powder house, lets try that color again.

If possible, could you shift the biker or the triple decker around so we can see the full three levels of the triple decker?

Thank you so much!

Hi Kim, here's another variation. If there's anything else you want to see please let me know. I'll be more than happy if we can finalized this today.

Looking good! Here are some final comments:

-Could we make the Powder House a different color so it stands out from the biker? Also maybe remove the little window line on the front of it.

-Could we also try a version where you keep the powder house the same color, but move it and the right building over to the left and put the triple deckers where they were? I'll mark the image so you can see what I'm saying.

Thanks!

Additionally:
-Please change the font to Proxima Nova
-Make the text just the gray color, but bold "Sustaina" so it stands out from Ville.
-For a version, we'd like to see the bus replaced with an outline of the Powder House, there is a picture in the contest brief and discussion.

Thank you!

Looks really good! Here are some things we can try:
-Can we lose the bus? Try one version just without it, and maybe one version with another triple decker replacing it?
-Maybe move the trees on the right behind the biker so the sun can peek out above them like how it's above the bus currently?

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Hey one more thing- could you change the building to one that looks like this classic three decker house? Adding the pic to the contest notes

This is a really cool direction! I like all the colors you included while still maintaining the original design and arrow. Could we see this same design shrunk down just a little bit? I'll put a line where the height should stop. Thanks!

Could we also try an arrow on the bottom? Roughly the same thickness as our markup?

Looks great! Could we try less narrow text?

Hey! Could you try making a bold line that looks like the biker will ride onto it? Also, please make the picture lighter, less gray so its more readable and stark. Thanks!

and let's maybe try to get the word SustainaVille inside the image. Thanks!

Hey subzero! Happy to see you uploading for one of our contests again. Could we try putting this design to the left of the text? Also, maybe try another version with a simplified design in the box so it's more readable from a distance. Thank you!

Hi Kim, anything you like to suggest based on my entries so far?