We're trying to nail down a color combo that looks good. Here are some ideas:
-Try the darker blue for Sustaina and keep the gray for Ville
-Dark green for Sustaina and keep the gray for Ville
-Let's also try dark green for sustaina and a slightly lighter (but still darkish) green for Ville.
Thank you for the edits! Here are some more suggestions:
-Could we see the people just walking, maybe holding hands?
-Maybe the people can be a biker and a tree? Or just the biker? Whatever fits there without being too small.
-Can we try turning all the buildings into triple deckers like the one on the left? Varying sizes is still good, we just want them to look less like skyscrapers.
Thanks! We are liking the addition of the "triple decker". Can we try to incorporate more triple deckers like that or just make the buildings more proportional? The other buildings (especially the one with the angular roof) look like sky scrapers but then end up smaller than the triple decker house so we need to even it out somehow.
Also, at the risk of making this too busy, we feel like we're missing a human element. Is there a way to add a person or people, even just an abstract representation. Maybe that works over on the right on the orange line or maybe they are over with the trees? It does not have to be a person on a bike or doing anything -- the point is to show that people are involved in making it SustainaVille. I tried to use editor tool to show an option where we lose one building in between the sun and the plug and try to add people in there? Could extend the orange vertical line if needed.
Great improvements! Some more tweaks:
-Can we swap the colors for Sustaina and Ville?
-Maybe make the line at the bottom slightly thicker
-We'd also like to see a version with no bottom line
-This could be hard, but if you could somehow make one of the buildings look like the triple decker house we put in the contest notes, that would be incredible.
Sorry one more thing- if possible, we'd like an inclusion of some element to represent a healthy community. So, possibly some versions with people/trees/bikers on the left side could be good. Just want to see our options here. Thank you again!
Thicker lines look good! Here are some suggestions:
-We'd like to see the gray replaced with a darker blue
-Let's try a lowercase font, but keeping the S and V upper.
-If you have access to it, could we switch this font to Proxima Nova? If not, could we see something similar?
-Can we see the sun brought down a little so the top is closer to the tops of the buildings?
Could we try shortening the buildings so they're the height the line I drew? Then we'd like to see the sun again, and the plug line look "electrified" and coming from the sun, so it would be orange of yellow. I am going to draw a rough idea of this.
Hey! Thanks for the updates. Could we see a version of this design without the trees and with the sun in the middle, between the buildings? Also if the plug could be larger. Thanks!
I like the simplicity of this design and the color in the font is a nice touch. Could we add in the sun you have in one of your other designs to bring that orange in and then finally, can you take you one of those lines to the buildings and turn it into a plug... maybe coming from the sun to show the electrification of the built environment through renewable energy?
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We're trying to nail down a color combo that looks good. Here are some ideas:
-Try the darker blue for Sustaina and keep the gray for Ville
-Dark green for Sustaina and keep the gray for Ville
-Let's also try dark green for sustaina and a slightly lighter (but still darkish) green for Ville.
Thanks!
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Also a version with the dark blue for "Sustaina" but maybe a slightly lighter blue for "Ville"
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-Could we see the people just walking, maybe holding hands?
-Maybe the people can be a biker and a tree? Or just the biker? Whatever fits there without being too small.
-Can we try turning all the buildings into triple deckers like the one on the left? Varying sizes is still good, we just want them to look less like skyscrapers.
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Thanks for the very helpful feedback...I've done some changes as you instructed, hope you like it...
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Also, at the risk of making this too busy, we feel like we're missing a human element. Is there a way to add a person or people, even just an abstract representation. Maybe that works over on the right on the orange line or maybe they are over with the trees? It does not have to be a person on a bike or doing anything -- the point is to show that people are involved in making it SustainaVille. I tried to use editor tool to show an option where we lose one building in between the sun and the plug and try to add people in there? Could extend the orange vertical line if needed.
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-Can we swap the colors for Sustaina and Ville?
-Maybe make the line at the bottom slightly thicker
-We'd also like to see a version with no bottom line
-This could be hard, but if you could somehow make one of the buildings look like the triple decker house we put in the contest notes, that would be incredible.
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-We'd like to see the gray replaced with a darker blue
-Let's try a lowercase font, but keeping the S and V upper.
-If you have access to it, could we switch this font to Proxima Nova? If not, could we see something similar?
-Can we see the sun brought down a little so the top is closer to the tops of the buildings?
Thank you so much!
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I've added a picture of the sun as well as a plug as a representation of renewable energy, I hope you like it.
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