João, good afternoon, I have saved your proposals for a potential reconsideration in future. You never know. Maybe you would like to send me your contact details to 993-4s@gmx.net
Thank you very much dear Thomas you are really kind! Wish you the best of luck with the new logo sucess for business and in life my friend and a lovelly 2013 :)
thank you for taking part in my tournament. Only the 2nd time in ten years that I encountered the situation to develop and choose a logo. I have noticed again as the time progresses and favorite designs are starting to develop that the selection process to me became somewhat more challenging. As I have seen some very interesting approaches including their refinements.
Your proposal was very strong from the beginning. Subtle and easily understandable at the same time. But at the end my final decision has led to a different design. I like to thank you for your hard work and for the fact that you’ve been willing to share with me your creativity and time.
I appreciate your awesome feedback and sharing all that.
I actually dated a german girl, she is now in Munich, but was to far from Portugal. I love how polite and nice she was. And learned a lot of the german culture, that its way more advanced them us in Portugal eheh
I´ve submitted how that logo can be incorporated in the flag.
About others changes to be honest I wouldn´t touch much more on the brand since its clean, flat and you can really do a lot with a simple and bold logo like this on future marketing materials even for embroider purposes.
I´m sure you will know in the end the logo you will want from the contest, just go with the designer that you fell that gave you the logo that stays in your head more time, I believe that would be the one.
As always feel comfortable to ask if you need anything more.
Sorry for the delay replying I´ve so many side jobs in my designer area, sometimes I can take some time, but I always reply.
FYI I have just requested an extra three days extension, for every one in our finalist phase to have a little extra time for creativity on refinement, provided same is necessary and for me for careful consideration.
Hi João, I have taken an intensive look again at all your proposals which are presently online for my contest. #23 is a very strong basis from the moment I saw it first. And her direct siblings are also good. I just discover the refinement on #263, ok. That will replace then #23. In general I have a good sense for details. But when in the office and actively involving in this tournament between the normal job sometimes I wish I would have more time on my hands. But it is how it is. A project needs to move forward in stages. If there is anything what you want to draw your attention on in terms of a detail, then pls also let me know in writing. Thanks, Thomas
Good morning João, thanks for your message. Yes, I do consider myself very lucky to be able to live here. I got here 13 years ago after having lived till my late 30'ies in Germany. I like nature, good weather and friendly people.
Thank you for your revisions.
As you came forward with a very strong proposal from the first moment I believe we can do now only some refinements. Thanks for shaping / center the letter "Y". To put the logo in a circle, appearing like a seal is also interesting.
If you have the capacity please take a look over here at a traditional element in the maritime scene: the flag. In particular in the yachting scene: the burgee. You can find an example here: https://nyyc.org/ Something to look at when playing with the idea how to integrate your logo idea for future use. I have worked for more than 20 years in commercial merchant shipping and it is a tradition there that ship owning companies do put their logo on a little table flag that you are exchanging with your business partners during a physical meeting...old fashioned traditions from pre pandemic times with no zoom meetings...lol
I will look again at all your proposal during my lunch break in around three hours and will try to give more feedback.
Looking after hours again at my fav logo of yours I still come back on the missing symmetry of the letter Y and the lowest part of your icon. I guess we should try to get it in line.
Hello João, thank you for your response and your additional proposals and developments. I am writing from the Leeward islands. It is fascinating for me to see how much a design can change in terms of strength by just changing one little detail. What I am trying to say is that I compare your initial #23 with the revised #240, U had smoothened the waves. And the expression changes right away. Although, I personally appreciate calm sees when being in/on the water. But your logo goes for me much more better with the strong peaking waves. A separation of the icon into two parts, one side aquamarine, the other black is also not my path. Working from #23 into directions as #231 and #237 is good. Can you find a symmetry of the letter "Y" in superyachts with the lowest point of your icon? What is the name of your fonts used?
Best regards, Thomas
I appreciate your awesome feedback. Please check some variations and let me know your thoughts.
Since you like the proposal and from my experience the changes might be subtle so it doesn´t remove you from it. Once you like it means it haves the vibe you want for your brand, and its intriguing thats why you can´t forget it. Since the logo its simple and bold it helps to create that memorable meaning. Even I worked a few other options based on that one so you can compare.
Usually I´m working at my agency and even after hours, but I always try to reply when I can so feel comfortable to aks if you need anything lease flat six.
Hello João, your proposal remains strong with me. What can be improved? Maybe we can take a look at the symmetry of the word "SUPERYACHT" and the letter "Y" which also has a symmetry by its own shape. Furthermore, I like the font you have chosen. Traditional, conservative, clear. But maybe as an alternative also looking for something more modern.
The icon: what can be done here? The shape around it? The shield, the bow? Don't get me wrong as it stands right from the beginning it is already good, but I would like to take the chance to try with you some more refinements. I am not a designer, I realize you wish input. But not sure at this moment what could be done. I rely on your creativity.
What time zone you are on?
Thank you for your input jjbq. I stopped at your propsal. The logo is not bad. The shape of a vessel's hull, together with the ocean and the sun. Clever. Conservative font for the superyachts and clean font for the Caribbean. Simple, not too complex. Good start.
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Thank you for your kind wishes.
Best regards
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Kindly regards,
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thank you for taking part in my tournament. Only the 2nd time in ten years that I encountered the situation to develop and choose a logo. I have noticed again as the time progresses and favorite designs are starting to develop that the selection process to me became somewhat more challenging. As I have seen some very interesting approaches including their refinements.
Your proposal was very strong from the beginning. Subtle and easily understandable at the same time. But at the end my final decision has led to a different design. I like to thank you for your hard work and for the fact that you’ve been willing to share with me your creativity and time.
Best regards
Thomas
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Take the time you need my friend do not worry. Anything just let me know.
Hope you´re having a lovely start of the day.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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And you´re welcome my friend.
I appreciate your awesome feedback and sharing all that.
I actually dated a german girl, she is now in Munich, but was to far from Portugal. I love how polite and nice she was. And learned a lot of the german culture, that its way more advanced them us in Portugal eheh
I´ve submitted how that logo can be incorporated in the flag.
About others changes to be honest I wouldn´t touch much more on the brand since its clean, flat and you can really do a lot with a simple and bold logo like this on future marketing materials even for embroider purposes.
I´m sure you will know in the end the logo you will want from the contest, just go with the designer that you fell that gave you the logo that stays in your head more time, I believe that would be the one.
As always feel comfortable to ask if you need anything more.
Sorry for the delay replying I´ve so many side jobs in my designer area, sometimes I can take some time, but I always reply.
Thank you Thomas.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you for your revisions.
As you came forward with a very strong proposal from the first moment I believe we can do now only some refinements. Thanks for shaping / center the letter "Y". To put the logo in a circle, appearing like a seal is also interesting.
If you have the capacity please take a look over here at a traditional element in the maritime scene: the flag. In particular in the yachting scene: the burgee. You can find an example here: https://nyyc.org/ Something to look at when playing with the idea how to integrate your logo idea for future use. I have worked for more than 20 years in commercial merchant shipping and it is a tradition there that ship owning companies do put their logo on a little table flag that you are exchanging with your business partners during a physical meeting...old fashioned traditions from pre pandemic times with no zoom meetings...lol
I will look again at all your proposal during my lunch break in around three hours and will try to give more feedback.
Kind regards
Thomas
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I appreciate your awesome feedback.
I was checking on google the Leeward islands and you live in a gorgeous place!!
And I understood now about the symmetry on the "Y". I´ve submitted revisions regarding that direction you gave me so you can considerate.
Please check and let me now what do you think.
The font for the title "Superyachts" - Trajan Pro Bold. For the slogan "of the caribbean" - Gotham Medium. Both top fonts.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I hope you´re having a lovely day.
I appreciate your awesome feedback. Please check some variations and let me know your thoughts.
Since you like the proposal and from my experience the changes might be subtle so it doesn´t remove you from it. Once you like it means it haves the vibe you want for your brand, and its intriguing thats why you can´t forget it. Since the logo its simple and bold it helps to create that memorable meaning. Even I worked a few other options based on that one so you can compare.
My timezone its this one:https://www.timeanddate.com/time/zone/portugal/porto
Usually I´m working at my agency and even after hours, but I always try to reply when I can so feel comfortable to aks if you need anything lease flat six.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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The icon: what can be done here? The shape around it? The shield, the bow? Don't get me wrong as it stands right from the beginning it is already good, but I would like to take the chance to try with you some more refinements. I am not a designer, I realize you wish input. But not sure at this moment what could be done. I rely on your creativity.
What time zone you are on?
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I appreciate the awesome feedback. I´m happy you like the logo concept.
If you need any changes feel free to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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