dear contest holder here are my entries for your contest #4 #5 #6 #7 #8 #9 If you need modifications please feel free to contact me kind regards Tzina lotus creative
Thank you for your detailed designs. There is a lot to like and our preference is entry #9. Please can you consider the following feedback:
we have gum trees not palm trees we have windsurfers and kitesurfers not sailing boats we don't like the black writing and prefer sunset colours delete the "mermaid" Good luck
dear contest holder thank you for the rank the appreciation and the feedback I will work on it according to your guidance :) kind regards Tzina lotus creative
Dear Tzina Thank you for taking on baord our comments. We continue to like your design and provide feedback as follows: 1. We need to make the logo less busy and a bit more abstract 2. From the 9th ranked logo could you remove the windsurfer and kitesurfer and replace with something more abstract representing the same thing. The best example of this is the sun in the #1 ranked logo which is actually a kite surfers sail. 3. I am not sure about the gum tree still so if you could produce variations of point 2 with and without the gum tree you have in the 10th ranked logo that would be great. Thanks and good luck.
Oh, and one more thing. I really like your Smooth Sailing logo - its a bit more the feel we are trying to create. Sunset Beach is a simple park on the edge of a big blue ocean with giant sunsets. Its that simplicity that we are trying to capture. Good luck
dear contest holder thank you for the message I will work on variations for your logo with the adjustments you requested, but in order for me to upload them you must switch ranks because in the judging phase only the 1st ranked designer can submit. If you think you can switch ranks in order for me to upload them, that would be great kind regards Tzina - lotus creative