Entry #40 would look great with more vibrant colours i think. Can you also show me what that would look like with the sun/person symbol in front of the word SUNBAR and the shadow that sits underneath the SUN SYMBOL could go underneath the word SUNBAR to separate the word from "& wax" similar to other submissions.
#73. I love what you have done with the S in the word SUNBAR. Could you make the top part of the S over more, so it looks more S and move it slightly back so its not overlapping the U too much. Not too curvy, but like the bottom part of the S. I dont really like the font on the rest of the SUNBAR word or the line underneath. Could you please look at #58 by greenlight, I love the line and "& Wax" like they have done it.
#73, like I really like the top of the S how it looks like spray paint, but just bring it slightly over/down a bit so its more S shape. I really like the colour you are using for the word SUNBAR. The line and the words "& Wax", i think i would like it white.
#76. Thank you nymalba, this is much better! I really like it. It looks classy and professional. I was wondering if you could show me what this looks like on a shiny black background (as well) just so I can see the different. Also on a white background (the only thing is, you will need to change the line & the "& wax) to black font when it has a black background or even a nice CHOCOLATE BROWN OR LATTE coloured font for the line and the "& the" against a white background. The only reason I ask is because at times I will be advertising on both black and white backgrounds. GREAT WORK, THANK YOU :)
#92 - Are you able to show me this with the line & words "& Wax" underneath in a chocolate brown and like a latte brown colour? And even one that goes from gold to brown?
#76 I prefer how this S extends out a bit more at the top. Just thinking of when I get my logo printed onto clothing etc, I still want it to be like an S. Its just that little bit more extended.
I didn't end up liking the chocolate brown in the line and the "& wax". I think having that in white or black looks better. Thank you.