#28 and 29 are very creative designs and we like how you incorporated the color blue.
#47 is close to what we are looking for. We really like how the roof looks sharp, the orange-yellow color for the sun and the wind underneath. You are doing a great job! We wanted to comment on the other ones you withdrew because we think you put a lot of effort into the design and we wanted to tell you that we appreciate your hard work :-). Anyways, we really like a design similar to #47. You can refer to the comments in the public section for more hints. We want to leave the creativity part to you. Keep up the good work.
#91,92 and 93 are very beautiful designs, but we are the only ones who know what SBE is about. Therefore, we want to focus on what our customers understand when they see our logo.
#80,81,82 look very nice! The thing is that the wind lines are hiding the roof and we think you fixed that #86, 88, 89. These are very nice indeed. These six were hard to not pick because we liked them so much, but we didn't because they look more traditional than #90, and we don't want to be like every other roof/siding company. They all have houses on the backround or the initials of their business. #90 is unique because the sun completes the outline of the house.
#76, 77, 78 are very elegant, professional, sharp and clear. We really like #76 and 77 but #90 is closest to what we like.
#90 is great! Can you take out the curl that extends on the roof and make that roof-line go straight down, past the sun-line? Just like it is on the right side of the sun. Also, can you make the roof a bit thicker? But not thicker than the wind in the bottom. We really like how it looks very sharp. One last thing, instead of the window can you replace it with the letters SBE in the same color as the roof or white? Try both.
Don't delete any designs unless you have a limit to how many designs you can submit or for personal reasons. However, we know we won't use #28 and 29.
OK good idea on working with #93. For #90, we see what you did with #109, but for both, keep them exactly the way they are but take out the curly line that comes out of the roof-line.
i am sorry i didn't understand "take out" as eliminate/delete (english words have more than one meaning in italian) see now entry #111...maybe sun's light is better on the left side as on entry 109
i want to tell you that tommorow i will not be available until about 18:30 pm (italian time) because of my personal commitments...anyway please feel you free to comment my new entries and request any change you want, i will start working again for you tommorow evening
hello! as you can see i have modified my entries...
some notes to help you with my update
entry #142 and #143 : roof line thicker
entry #144 and #145: i have used a square shape in place of the circle to experiment how it's look
entry #146: it's in place of the entry #93
entry #151: i have tried to make the sun more realistic
entry 154: it's similar to other but i have though to emphasize the concept of "repairing roof" using the square shapes as a mosaic (to express "reconstruction").
All for now. I will wait your own opinion about it
Thank you for working so hard! We hope you are doing well.
Between entries #111 and #154, you have not only met our requirements, you have also exceeded them and we don't know which one to pick! We will do our best :-).
#113, 114 are excellent improvements from #109, about the blue curl, and #90, about the window. However, we think your choice of a window was a better one. We have a few more comments..
#144, 145 are more conservative than the rest so we want to pick something that is less conservative than these two. By the way, very nice of you to experiment because it helps us see what fits our requirements and what doesn't.
#143 is more distinctive than #142 because of the white space by the roof. It makes it easier to see what the design is about.
#146 is fantastic design and we wish we could use it but we won't because we would seem selfish infront of our clients. It's as if we are telling everybody that we have a business when we want to tell everybody that they should let us do their work.
Anyways, all the above explanations are what is making us lean more towards #111, 113, 151 and 154. These four are closest to what we want. 151 is the most vibrant and the one we want the most. #154 was going to be our choice but the reconstruction idea may make clients think we do brick work. This is the most popular thing clients want here when you finsh building their roof and siding. #111 and 113 are just a bit less vibrant and direct than #151 so we'll stick with 151. We will rank very soon. Thank you so far.
We just typed all of the comments and they got deleted...
Our top choice is #151, because it has everything we want and it's the most clear as well as most vibrant. #154 was awesome, it's just that people may think we do brick work, which is very popular in our area after roof and siding work. We were going to pick #111 or #113 but 151 has such a clear and vibrant message that we will stick with that.
#144, 145 are more traditional which are a very nice thought. #146 may make clients think we are selfish by putting the attention on the letters of our business and not the work that we can do for them. Clients are picky when they have to pay us money :-).
Thank you for adding a thicker line for #142 and 143. For now we'll stick with #151. We will rank soon.
thank you for your attention to my drawings. You are one of the few clients who regularly follows the race commenting on the new proposals. This is gratifying for the designers. However, since you like the entry #151 I want to propose it on a different background, slightly smaller and with the wind line
Thanks :-). We have commented on every designer and that's why it's taking so long sometimes to respond. I was in architecture/art for 1 year and hung out with designers 20hrs/day so I learned a little bit about how you guys think. Besides, the work is amazing. I could never have done these on my own, neither could my partner.
Thanks for the different background, we will wait for it.
There they are! #200 and 201 are even better. We would choose #201 more than #200 because chances are we will always use white background. #201 is also awesome because you added the wind line and we were looking for that :-). Can you make the letters a little bigger? Don't know if that's possible because of the entire design.