I appreciate your submissions. The style is not what we are looking for. We are looking for something more contemporary and masculine. If you see our top ranked entries, it may give you a sense of what appeals to us. I would encourage you to submit additional designs.
#211 & #212 are much better. Could you provide it as a white on black and a black on white? Also, we prefer the colors rich green, burgundy, and copper (as in the top ranked designs), could you provide some color mockups utilizing these colors?