hi CH, thx for your feedback, I realy appreciated it.
and heres my revised versions:
#25, i removed the starburst and put the original "o" letter.
#26, i changed the emphasize of the "action" spirit from starburst to movement line/shade as i put it on letter "a" .
#27, i changed the emphasize of the "action" spirit again...from movement line/shade to "!" mark as i put it to subtitute the "i" letter with its rotation and give it different color. i realy like this one...
#28, alternative version of #27with removed mortarboard.
#29, here i give u the white background version of all above.
#30, here is the alternative version of #16, as u ask, i removed the star blaze, but FYI the star represent the goal....goal of whatever action we did...but without the star i think it still represent an action...do you?
#31, is the white background version of #30.
thx a lot...
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