#5 simple but efficient! Can you design a flor joist under the name just to see if its to much? But I like it! Unfortunatly the other (#11 and 9) I'm not sure about using the "S". By the way your typo is great!
Thank you for the feedback. I'm so glad you like the typography! I've customized this typography to transmit the structure concept. That type was already strong and serious and i made some graphic interventions to make it more "structural". Here is the new layout.
My partner and I like your design with the floor joist underneath. But one thing remains, the layout of the joist is not structurally talking correct! Look carefully to the attached file in the breifing. Good job! Thank you!