This is what we want to see. The font from #68 without the cuts in the letters. Use a flat green color choice, flat black, gradient silver and gradient green. Move the tach to the end so it is not incorporated with the G and make all the red, black. Let me know if that makes sense.
wow...That's cool. As the contest is in judging mode, only 1st ranked designer can submit designs. so if you can push me to 1st so i can submit your new requested variations. bat sadly, I won't be available this weekend, as I'll be traveling. will return on Monday. hope it's wont be much of problem for you, sorry for the inconvenience. btw....I'll be available 5 more hours form now (the time i post this comment).
OK. We want to make some adjustments and combine some elements of your designs. This is not say that you haven't already done a great job, just making some tweaks to make sure the client is happy.
First. Let's take #70 and remove the lines that cut into the font. Next let's shift the tach to the right so it doesn't tie into the "G". No red in the tack try Green, Silver and Black. Keep the LLC in there.
Because #72 has the flame in it. I just ranked the first one I grabbed of yours. #68, #70, #72 etc. all have the same font design. Because We are making some changes, it didn't really matter to me which was in first place. I can move a different choice in first if you like.