Strawberry Creek Inn B&BLogo Design Contest

You can check now #265

Hi Drawz, good morning.
thank you for the revision option...

The text is too modern now with the changes. We prefer your prior design #206. Can you revert the text back on this version? We like your other changes.

Hello, I made some little changes on texts and added shadow above ribbon of main text. #258
Thank you!

thanks, will be ranking / placing the one on the black background

thanks!
ranking #206. also, thanks for making it larger.

Good morning, I made some refine on tree also on elements, you can see it now #205 and #206
Thank you!

Hi Drawz,

Thanks for the revision.

I am sorry if i am being unclear, as i seem to have given you bad comment/feedback. can you look at #164 again, and notice that there is already a white line seperating the red line art and the green border; I am asking you to make it thicker (outwards towards the green border). The effect in this version now has a thin green and thin white line which we dont want.

similarly, can you make the outer white line THREE times as thick as it currently is. We want separation from the background.

lastly, please 'zoom in' or enlarge the logo so we can see more detail. I know LT has rules, but you definitely have room to enlarge.

Thanks!

of course. no worries. it was easier for me to get the thoughts and revision feedback out now. and congrats again!

Will do all changes after finalist! Because need to refine a bit the trees!
Thank you!

please see comments on #164. applies to this one too.

Thanks!

ok. you're in the top 3, congrats.

These are the tweaks we'll need (either now or after finalists are announced).
1. Please place the logo on a dark background (black is fine). Try to MAXIMIZE the logo to fill the entire board so we can see the detail
2. please put a white line around the outside of the logo.
3. Between red/ green, place a line about one third the thickness of the green line on top of the house. what i mean by this is for anytime green or red would touch (a. line art and green border, b.red 'STRAWBERRY' and green 'CREEK INN'.

that's it. should be good to go

sorry let me clarify. we like shape #115 or WIDER, fatter, but not taller or skinier. my last line above didnt make sense.

hi drawz.
the shape has changed...
we really like #115 shape, or even slightly wider, but not fatter /taller.

can you please work with that original and make the changes? these new shapes/ layouts are veering away from the final look we want.

sorry if I caused any confusion.

Hi, I upload 2 version #161 and #162

Hi Drawz,

Thanks for the revisios.
Ok, final few hours. a few quick changes for all :
1) mountain line behind house is a great idea if we had space. but it s too much detail so we ask it be removed.
2) the green section under STRAWBERRY with the words 'CREEK INN' should be one solid section. please remove the outline/ line in white that separates it into two green sections like in #115. Just need bigger font for "CREEK INN".
3) we want separation between the red line artwork of the house and trees and the green line, a thick white line in between.
4). not for now, but for finalist phase, (I dont want to forget), maybe try a wider 'fatter' shape version of this giving you more space to have more trees?)
5) we do like the word 'Strawberry' sticking out like in this #115, not like #157 and #158. this is a unique design element you have in the shape.

Hello, you can check now #157 and #158. Also I add the mount line behind the house!

Thanks for making all the changes we asked for so quickly...
ok, what I meant to say is not just to change the proportion / sizing of the 'STRAWBERRY' banner, and the image, but really to zoom out of the image a bit to show just more sky and trees... not too much, maybe even just a factor of 10-25% zoom out? Not too much sky but more trees.
Also, can you make 'CREEK INN' text a bit bigger and do leave space between the image in red and the GREEN border. I know I asked for a thick border, but my other manager is thinking this is too thick, perhaps halfway between here and #67

Laslty, Can we see a negative version of the line art (reverse white and red) in this shape.
I think that's all the changes we will ask before we decide on finalists (and as of now, you are in the top 3!).

oh almost forgot, can you minimize the amount of white space AROUND the logo so it shows up larger in the previews?

oh almost forgot, can you minimize the amount of white space AROUND the logo so it shows up larger in the previews?

Also a great logo! looks very good.

Same feeback here as on other finalist #67:
Do not cut off the house (see below for this shape, suggestions).
an you rework the tree on the left (round one) and maybe remove it and place the other tree (from original artwork) that is taller behind the house on the left. maybe zoom out just a LITTLE bit.... this one is not as zoomed in as #67 so may not need it.

upper semicircle line (green) is just the right strength.

Really like what you've done so far! THANKS!!!

this is definitely one of our top faves and will rank accordingly. Also, you're definitely in the finalists as of now.

Ok feedback on ALL recent revisions:
Can you:
Do not cut off the house (see below for this shape, suggestions).
an you rework the tree on the left (round one) and maybe remove it and place the other tree (from original artwork) that is taller behind the house on the left.

For this shape:
can we make the square shape bigger (relative to the banner with "STRAWBERRY") so that the banner doesn't stick out as much but more importantly you have room for the artwork...
then, can you 'zoom out' of the line art so that the house is not cut off and is full in frame.
Lastly, can you please make the outer border (green line) thicker (175% of current size?)

leaving feedback on others and ranking. please standby.

Good morning, I made some revision on text also on building, you can check it #64, #65, #66, #67, #68, #69

Hello, thank you for your feedback, no worries for the long comment :), will do all changes tomorrow!
Again thank you!

sorry for the long comments but this is one of our top favorites

We LOVE this shape, one of the most unique.
sorry for the long delay in response but we wanted to review your submissions and comment / add revisions.

For this one, can we see a revised version
1. using the specified font.
2. with thicker outer border
3. in the current "STRAWBERRY" text banner is green with red border, please make it one solid color, no border.
4. Can you swap colors so that a) entire border around is GREEN, with GREEN line art, and RED background behind all the text
5. please space out anytime red/green would touch with white space.
6. Please use your artwork in #32 here.

we're undecided between your simplified artworks in #31 and #32. We like both but are unsure which one would be the right one in the final winning logo. For now we are leaning towars #32, so please use that one.

ranking your other submissions in the top 3.

Can we see a version of this with the colors reversed and one revision - the text banner "STRAWBERRY" should be one color (currently green, but will reverse to red). The only thing green in the final will be the line artwork of the house

ranking other submissions in the top 4. Adding detailed comment, so it may be a few minutes before it shows up.

ranking your other great submissions, please see comments posted there. sorry for delay but you had one of the most diverse series.