Strawberry Creek Inn B&BLogo Design Contest

exactly yes. ranking #136

like this? #136

no just remove the B & B

hey, am I missing how this is different than #63? is the green deeper/ corrected ?

Hi there,

can we see a version of this with the "Creek Inn' in our font?

Hi there,
well this is an interesting new design! we like this option. only a few reivisions.

RED - please make sure the PMS colors both red and green are accurate. It's very hard for us to focus on the design when the colors are off, and I have some junior staff who when they see it say "the colors are wrong' and can't get beyond that.

For the real revisions:
1. Can you use our spec font so we can see how it looks? you can stretch or change shape as you need to.
2. please remove 'B&B'. Only need 'CREEK INN' for the lower portion text.

Thanks. only a few more thoughts on your other versions (after I grab a lunch break.)

Hi OneSketch,

raking the other version, with revisions. sending this one to 'prefer others'.

thanks for the rivsions, will rank your more recent ones and comment shortly. We appreciate the work on the line art simplifications... they look great.

how bout this?

We like what you've done with the negative artwork, and your interpretation of our artwork. Perhaps remove the sun so the sky is solid green?

Also, two quick revisions:
(remove sun under 'W')
1) increase space / white space between the red text oval and green interior line artwork
2) Please make the outermost green oval thicker (try double weight?).

pushing this one down to rank your other design revisions higher, see feedback there.

ranking your #37

Hi OneSketch,

This is what we had in mind with the artwork simplification! Great step in the right direction.

quick correction, the green is PMS 626C, we're having a hard time with this very light green... please update .

Also, with the more modern artwork, the 'Est. 1980' doesnt seem to fit. Maybe remove and shift artwork down to show more of the trees?

Thanks for the revision.
Please see revised brief and additional info... new shapes we've come up with that no artist has yet created and we've posted/opened to all.

Lastly, if you can work on the line art inside the medallion to simplify (remove some trees, simplify the house) or create NEW line art representative of the essence of our historical one but more modern.

Also, can you incorporate our two colors? perhaps making the line art in the specified PMS green?

copying comments here from older version entry 18:
Thanks for submitting! we love your other work and can't wait to see all your design for US!

Please note that since your submitted, we updated the brief. please see revised brief. Mainly, we really want to stick to the same font to unify the two inns (perhaps one version with outline and one without. Also, the medallion artwork should be even less detailed. If you can use the mug artwork (the one you already used) and derive a simpler more modern clean line version, that would be what our final product should look like.

Lastly, we would LOVE to see some new and original shapes for the medallion logo that go beyond oval, or that incorporate the oval design in new way... a sister/brother or cousin of the Quiet Creek Inn logo shape (but not another 6 sided one). perhaps 5 sided pentagon with rounded corners, other shapes (parallelogram with angled shape? /=/
)

thank you for participating in our contest, and good luck!

Hello..
Thank you so much for your feedback.
I update my entries #33 use strawberries for entries no #18
Best Regards
OneSketch

Thanks for submitting! we love your other work and can't wait to see all your design for US!

Please note that since your submitted, we updated the brief. please see revised brief. Mainly, we really want to stick to the same font to unify the two inns (perhaps one version with outline and one without. Also, the medallion artwork should be even less detailed. If you can use the mug artwork (the one you already used) and derive a simpler more modern clean line version, that would be what our final product should look like.

Lastly, we would LOVE to see some new and original shapes for the medallion logo that go beyond oval, or that incorporate the oval design in new way... a sister/brother or cousin of the Quiet Creek Inn logo shape (but not another 6 sided one). perhaps 5 sided pentagon with rounded corners, other shapes (parallelogram with angled shape? /=/
)

thank you for participating in our contest, and good luck!

Thanks!

We like the strawberries you added here. perhaps move them to your other design?

We like the idea on this but the shape of an oval works better so we are ranking your other design.

thanks!