The concept is interesting. The font seems lost with the size of the image to it's left. Also, that image (shadowed) will be difficult to recreate in stich work. As mentioned to others, if you are going to spell the name out, the "Inc." at the end is important.
I also see a great deal of the same colors being used by everyone. Don't be afraid to be different and work with some other colors if you think it will help.
I'm interested to see where you go with this.