I have simplified the logo - I feel this dilutes it a bit. The original intent was for the middle star to show the difference between you and the competition.
i disagree not with the intent but with the perception. It looked like i hit the target with a shotgun. I want to hit the target with a laser. I would like to see the burst merged with the bullseye if possible. I dont want to give the perception of barely hitting the bullseye. I want to nail it dead center.
sorry I meant #71 not #77. I like everything except for the center of the bullseye. I am envisioning it embroidered on a shirt and the burst might get lost a bit. I can't explain more because there might be a couple solutions, such as making the center of the bullseye smaller or making the burst bigger or making the burst go all the way around or making the burst 5 point like a star or 6 points.
thanks for that. I think we can eliminate 5 point stars. The other designs look like 6-8 points so we can stick to that. I also think the white middle doesn't work.
Expect the final design to be more subtle as the current entry #71 is extremely close already.
reverse the shades of blue so the bullseye is lighter. eliminate the white around the tail of the burst as in #71
add a polish/glass/lighting effect to the name 'stark marketing'
any way to clean it up in the middle? I see bullseye peeking out from behind the burst. also, the bottom left burst is a bit close to the circle. can you move it back a smidge?