I like it, but I think the 'mark' should be smaller and text larger. Can you try a something with hands that has some sensuality to it (whatever that means to you!).
1) Everything needs to be BIGGER. That is, make use of the entire space. 2) The phone numbers need to be bigger and please use '-' instead of a period between the numbers. 3) Please try another image--I don't understand the image ;)