Randi, pls follow the 's' style in #70 first. And then pls modify the last letter "s" to link it to the previous "s". The letter "s" should be clearly shown. No need to be very flowery. CLARITY is the key.
followed the "s" style from #70. also made the link between the 2 "s" letters. connection is similar to how letters e and s is connected. so that connection style stays the same
#130 This is good. The letter "s" is connected greatly. :) Pls connect the letter "r" to the letter "e" in the MIDDLE. I want the connection to be in the middle. Just like how we connect the letters in writing. Thx!