#147 has risen to the top but we'd like to see a revision. Our team would like you to try the following?
1. Make the person look less like an infant. Maybe thicken the neck, flatten the back 2. Put a riding helmet on the person with it sitting on his head correctly (not tilted back like the cowboy hat) 3. Straighten out the horses back under the "Inc." (take away the second curve and make it flow from the curve above it.) 4. Add a 2nd ear to the horse 5. Place the name under the logo with "Special" stacked on top of "Eqestrians Inc." 6. Leave the hand but perhaps move it down and tilt it up a little so it doesn't look like it's coming out of the persons chest.
Thank you for the redesigns. It's looking better. Here are a few other things our team would like to see. Can you:
1. Take off the straps of the Helmet 2. Still not happy with the back of the person. Can you bring the bump down more and/or can you bring the horses mane over the person's back like you did on the Hope Reins of Raleigh? 3. Let us see the new design with "Special Equestrians" curved over top like #148 and another on the bottom like #155. We can't decide which one we like best. 4. Something doesn't look quite right with the hand. Maybe move it down but we are not quite sure. Do you have any ideas?
We have high hopes for this. Thank you for making these changes.
#161 I have made modifications to the nose, chin, and neck in an attempt to make the person look older. I removed the hair tuff; it seemed to add to the problem of the person looking infantile. Hope this is going in the right direction. :)